According to a recent report by our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the last year. Clearly, the content of these reviews is not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not in the quality of our movies but with public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater quantity of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising.
The advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company is claiming that the decrease in the percentage of people attending the Super Screen produced movies in the last year is because that the public is not well informed about the good movies that are available in the market.I did not find the argument reasonable as the director of the company has neglected and overlooked the statistics that can be helpful for more details analyses.
One of the probable reason of people less attending the Super Screen produced movies may be the high inflation in the market.With the increasing price of the goods , the people would be saving the money for the necessary items rather than spending on the "luxury" of watching a movie in the theater. It may be possible that the there is a decrease in percentage of people watching other production movies in theater also rather than the super screen movie production company. The argument did not provide any evidence that shows the the statistics of the other production companies did not suffer.
Other reason could be a shift in the taste of people. People have enjoyed watching Super Screen produced movies for some years and now finding the concepts of its movies mundane and boring. People wants to enjoy movies of different genres and different styles. So, even if they know that there is a good quality movie of Super Screen, they are not much eager to see it.
Another reason could be that people are choosing to buy a DVD of the movies rather than going to the theater for watching a movie.Through DVD , they can watch the movie any time they want in the comforts of home.
Thus, I do not agree with the advertising director to increase the budget for the advertising as many of the other logical factors are ignored by him in the argument.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287425149701 0.25644967241 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.161676646707 0.15541462614 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.062874251497 0.0836205057962 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0449101796407 0.0520304965353 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0269461077844 0.0272364105082 99% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140718562874 0.125424944231 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0479041916168 0.0416121511921 115% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58425178124 2.79052419416 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0149700598802 0.026700313972 56% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.152694610778 0.113004496875 135% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0209580838323 0.0255425247493 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00898203592814 0.0127820249294 70% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1830.0 2731.13054187 67% => OK
No of words: 315.0 446.07635468 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80952380952 6.12365571057 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.57801047555 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336507936508 0.378187486979 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24126984127 0.287650121315 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174603174603 0.208842608468 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0888888888889 0.135150697306 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58425178124 2.79052419416 93% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 207.018472906 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.450793650794 0.469332199767 96% => OK
Word variations: 44.3481979734 52.1807786196 85% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.039408867 50% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 31.5 23.2022227129 136% => OK
Sentence length SD: 114.073879569 57.7814097925 197% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.0 141.986410481 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5 23.2022227129 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.724660767414 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 3.58251231527 223% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 55.626984127 51.9672348444 107% => OK
Elegance: 2.03846153846 1.8405768891 111% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403635986851 0.441005458295 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.224913371603 0.135418324435 166% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.141538484515 0.0829849096947 171% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.725942271841 0.58762219726 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.223707270476 0.147661913831 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215671470082 0.193483328276 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706712460517 0.0970749176394 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.45406806619 0.42659136922 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.179558648067 0.0774707102158 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278324835533 0.312017818177 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547450009082 0.0698173142475 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.33743842365 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.87684729064 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.82512315271 21% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 6.46551724138 124% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 5.36822660099 19% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 14.657635468 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.