The argument made by Airline industry representatives that flying is better than driving in terms of safety procedures since it depends on two specific reasons. First, study shows that a number of deaths caused by car accidents are much more than those of air planes. Another reason which implies that pilots are more careful as they are less likely to have accidents. However, the argument is not entirely logically convincing as it ignores certain crucial assumptions.
First of all, the argument depends on an ambiguous study that shows that death rates from car accidents are much more than those of flight accidents. The study should clearly define where and when that study has been done? It may be taken in an undeveloped or third-world country which has not cultivated roads so that result to a large number of deaths. Also, mathematics not always give a precise indicator, in other words, 40000 out of 1000000 who drive cars on roads, are different than 200 death out of 1000 who take the plane. As a result, the first study should answer how many numbers of participants are taken??
Secondly, the assumption made by Airline industry representatives that pilots are less probably to have accidents on roads by four times may be true in real life since they are they spend most of their time in the air so they less likely to drive their cars. Hence, depending on the previous assumption as an indicator that pilots are more cautious than others may appear dubious.
Thus, the argument is not completely sound. The evidence in support of the conclusion that flight is more secure than driving does little to prove that conclusion since it does not address the assumptions already raised.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 363, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mean'?
Suggestion: mean
...ld need to know what being a safe pilot means. Keep in mind that we are solely evalua...
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Line 4, column 685, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...make this argument valid is what having a 'safe pilot' means for airlin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, similarly, so, then, therefore, as for, as to, kind of, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.6327345309 183% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 13.6137724551 169% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 28.8173652695 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 55.5748502994 144% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 16.3942115768 152% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2816.0 2260.96107784 125% => OK
No of words: 578.0 441.139720559 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87197231834 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90322654589 4.56307096286 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8163518072 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 204.123752495 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432525951557 0.468620217663 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 844.2 705.55239521 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 4.96107784431 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4494070372 57.8364921388 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.434782609 119.503703932 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1304347826 23.324526521 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95652173913 5.70786347227 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.25449101796 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.20758483034 171% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176683749946 0.218282227539 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595332008023 0.0743258471296 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536991631569 0.0701772020484 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080136147076 0.128457276422 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590923108596 0.0628817314937 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.3799401198 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.3550499002 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 98.500998004 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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