An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
The arguments concludes an international development organization deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus,has to engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A.to justified this conclusion ,the arguments are not to be meaningless of the statement.However the argument fails to the response to promote this type of millet.
First of all,the arguments does not supported to that nay kind of the reasons to nation in Tagus,new engineered breed of millet are are impoverished nation .The statement not to support to reasonable to the new breed are to impoverished nation.
Secondly,the arguments to be fails to some greed to give the farmer for that type of new breed of millet to buy on the governments are give to subsidies. This idea are very foolish to adherent the farmers buying to seeds.
Thirdly ,the arguments can be fails because of the Tagus peoples are will readily adopt the new variety because of the millet is staple food .that does not to define
In conclusion , the assertion that the ideas of the new breed of millet high in vitamin A to be not to define more important point to given to farmers are buy to that type seed to improvements .
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...re buy to that type seed to improvements .
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'third', 'thirdly', 'as to', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271889400922 0.25644967241 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.161290322581 0.15541462614 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0875576036866 0.0836205057962 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0506912442396 0.0520304965353 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0272364105082 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.110599078341 0.125424944231 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0184331797235 0.0416121511921 44% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.96320876387 2.79052419416 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.110599078341 0.026700313972 414% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.138248847926 0.113004496875 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00921658986175 0.0255425247493 36% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00460829493088 0.0127820249294 36% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1192.0 2731.13054187 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 203.0 446.07635468 46% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87192118227 6.12365571057 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.57801047555 82% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325123152709 0.378187486979 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251231527094 0.287650121315 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.167487684729 0.208842608468 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.152709359606 0.135150697306 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96320876387 2.79052419416 106% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 207.018472906 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463054187192 0.469332199767 99% => OK
Word variations: 39.2634765025 52.1807786196 75% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 20.039408867 25% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 40.6 23.2022227129 175% => OK
Sentence length SD: 111.820570558 57.7814097925 194% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 238.4 141.986410481 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.6 23.2022227129 175% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 0.724660767414 331% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 3.58251231527 726% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 65.7231527094 51.9672348444 126% => OK
Elegance: 1.89130434783 1.8405768891 103% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.516026398125 0.441005458295 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.370869616516 0.135418324435 274% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.152617893534 0.0829849096947 184% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.929558357315 0.58762219726 158% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122346642126 0.147661913831 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.348265920168 0.193483328276 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15400914801 0.0970749176394 159% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.506074384324 0.42659136922 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.121752748958 0.0774707102158 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.369047562024 0.312017818177 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127852639593 0.0698173142475 183% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.33743842365 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.87684729064 58% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 6.46551724138 15% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 3.0 5.36822660099 56% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 4.0 14.657635468 27% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.