Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the
argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The inoculations against the cow flu should be routinely administered to all the people in the areas where the disease is detected. If such inoculation is done routinely then it may continuously increase and after a certain stage it becomes difficult to control.
The flu and disease weather it may be more dangerous or less it should be treated with a care. There is a famous saying " A stitch in time saves nine." The same things apply here. If a cow flu is detected with in a certain area then the administration should take necessary step to prevent it and control the further spreading the of the flu. If the cow flu administration thinks that cow flu is not more hazardous to the humans, there is less possibility of the person getting killed by the cow flu.
The past events are always a apothesis for these kinds of events, they should always learn from the past mistakes. Before three to four decade the rat flu was considered to be less hazardous in almost all the parts of the world. The European countries considered that this flu does not any damage to humans because there is very less chance of person getting killed from rat flu. So the administration do not take necessary routine checks for the flu. And the spreading of the increase and it cause a great epidemic to the society killing over more than lakhs of humans in the Europe over a period of 5 years.
Besides providing this inoculations it is very much necessary to improve the inoculations because it has been noted in the past that the flu are continuously changing there cells structure and hence it becomes very much necessary to make necessary improvements in the inoculations. The use of necessary vaccine has to be done. Before 2 decades there has been high rate of polio patients all across the world but the development of proper and perfect vaccine to fight against it has now almost made it absolute. Thus the proper vaccine development against the cow flu helps to remove it safely.
Thus it is very much necessary that whatever the flu and disease be, weather they kill humans or not but the administration should take necessary steps in order to keep it under control. Thus it is very much necessary for the administration to provide a inoculation against the cow flu routinely to all the people of the disease detected areas, so that any epidemic caused due to unawareness approach may cause a great damage to the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 28, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... cow flu. The past events are always a apothesis for these kinds of events, th...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'decade' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'decades'.
Suggestion: decades
...the past mistakes. Before three to four decade the rat flu was considered to be less h...
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Line 5, column 494, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...nd the spreading of the increase and it cause a great epidemic to the society killing...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...period of 5 years. Besides providing this inoculations it is very much necessary ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...nst it has now almost made it absolute. Thus the proper vaccine development against ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e cow flu helps to remove it safely. Thus it is very much necessary that whatever...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...teps in order to keep it under control. Thus it is very much necessary for the admin...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...teps in order to keep it under control. Thus it is very much necessary for the admin...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ssary for the administration to provide a inoculation against the cow flu routine...
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Line 9, column 412, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'great damage'.
Suggestion: great damage
...d due to unawareness approach may cause a great damage to the society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227876106195 0.25644967241 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.16592920354 0.15541462614 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0862831858407 0.0836205057962 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0641592920354 0.0520304965353 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.037610619469 0.0272364105082 138% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.119469026549 0.125424944231 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0442477876106 0.0416121511921 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71778275396 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0398230088496 0.026700313972 149% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.132743362832 0.113004496875 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0176991150442 0.0255425247493 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00442477876106 0.0127820249294 35% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2433.0 2731.13054187 89% => OK
No of words: 426.0 446.07635468 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71126760563 6.12365571057 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.57801047555 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326291079812 0.378187486979 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.227699530516 0.287650121315 79% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.143192488263 0.208842608468 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110328638498 0.135150697306 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71778275396 2.79052419416 97% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 207.018472906 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415492957746 0.469332199767 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.6948273883 52.1807786196 86% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.039408867 85% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0588235294 23.2022227129 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1890332468 57.7814097925 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.117647059 141.986410481 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0588235294 23.2022227129 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.529411764706 0.724660767414 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.14285714286 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 3.58251231527 279% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.8287765811 51.9672348444 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.46280991736 1.8405768891 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413349711511 0.441005458295 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.156737001945 0.135418324435 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0995018208104 0.0829849096947 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.628696836393 0.58762219726 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133737000969 0.147661913831 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.199702394514 0.193483328276 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111418275233 0.0970749176394 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.541698552898 0.42659136922 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0312843411967 0.0774707102158 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323937252964 0.312017818177 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620965763141 0.0698173142475 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.87684729064 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.82512315271 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 6.46551724138 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.82389162562 35% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 14.657635468 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.