In order to alleviate the serious unemployment problem in our town,we should encourage.Autotech to build its automobile manufacturing plant in our area.The Hillview landfill which has been undevelopped for decades is a perfect site for this plant.the building and staffing of this plant will put to work thousand of Hillview residents left unemployed after computech computer software programming company abandoned its national facility last year.i am asking the city council to authorize a large campaign to attract the company and offer a significant tax incentives to make our town attractive to this giant of car manufacturing.
The argument conclude that City of the hillview landfill is not devlope so if we can develope this land for the Automobile manufacturing plant so number of the people have employ in this company so unemployment are less in the city and land are developed.In this argument author have suggested the many assumpiton and full of hole are showing in the argue so I am not satisfy to this arguement.
Firstly,In this arguement author suggested If the area of the hillview is devloped so Unemployment are less in the city,But it can not be assume that if Automobile plant manufactor in the city so this plant accepted the emploayment to the city,If it will not get a employ of the city people so this plant have many difficulty and problem are produce for people and after this plant is manufactor so Don ot mentain in this argue compay have only employ in the city.
Authors says that in last year No of people Unemploy in computer software programming compay.SO this people have employment to this compay manufacture,But Author do not recognize that in last year no of people are unemploy so in future After this compay manufacture all the people employ in the compay or not. Author only assume that the if compay have manufature so employment are in the city only also it will help to the city for devlopement.
Secondly,Author have many assuemtion in this arguement like It is very perfect plant for the hillview city and it's very helful to the no of people,But After This plant develope many problem are occures in the city like have 24-Hour noise pollution and no of vehical are parking in the city and so many exports and imports in the city,so in this city very high problems can be develope. Author only shows the one side on the argument that will be not show after the devloprment which are problems are devloped in the city.
In this arguement author not guess the so many problem have occure after develope this plant for example Unemployment people have employ after the devlopement.People have not problem like pollution and any different condition are occure in the city and whether is very nice after in the city.Author cannot be suggested after build this new compay people have not any problem are occure and and development and profit will be gain to the city.
Therefore I conclude that Any city have developement to the manufacturing new plant It will affects the city and very difficulty have occures after it's developement.It's is not the very high reason if compay have build so unemployment are less.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'concludes'.
Suggestion: concludes
The argument conclude that City of the hillview landfill is n...
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Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'employed'.
Suggestion: employed
...ring plant so number of the people have employ in this company so unemployment are les...
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Suggestion: In
...less in the city and land are developed.In this argument author have suggested the...
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...umpiton and full of hole are showing in the argue so I am not satisfy to this arguement. ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'satisfied'.
Suggestion: satisfied
...le are showing in the argue so I am not satisfy to this arguement. Firstly,In this a...
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Suggestion: , In
...ot satisfy to this arguement. Firstly,In this arguement author suggested If the ...
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Suggestion: , But
...ped so Unemployment are less in the city,But it can not be assume that if Automobile...
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Suggestion: , If
...ant accepted the emploayment to the city,If it will not get a employ of the city pe...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...loayment to the city,If it will not get a employ of the city people so this plant...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun difficulty seems to be countable; consider using: 'many difficulties'.
Suggestion: many difficulties
...y of the city people so this plant have many difficulty and problem are produce for people and ...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'employed'.
Suggestion: employed
... mentain in this argue compay have only employ in the city. Authors says that in la...
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Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: NOW[2]
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Suggestion: Now
...city. Authors says that in last year No of people Unemploy in computer software...
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Suggestion: these
...computer software programming compay.SO this people have employment to this compay m...
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Suggestion: , But
...ve employment to this compay manufacture,But Author do not recognize that in last ye...
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Suggestion: now
...thor do not recognize that in last year no of people are unemploy so in future Aft...
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Suggestion: , Author
...to the city for devlopement. Secondly,Author have many assuemtion in this arguement ...
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Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...illview city and its very helful to the no of people,But After This plant develope...
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Suggestion: , But
... and its very helful to the no of people,But After This plant develope many problem ...
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Line 7, column 253, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...y like have 24-Hour noise pollution and no of vehical are parking in the city and ...
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Suggestion: , so
... so many exports and imports in the city,so in this city very high problems can be ...
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Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
... this arguement author not guess the so many problem have occure after develope this plant f...
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Line 9, column 131, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'employed'.
Suggestion: employed
...nt for example Unemployment people have employ after the devlopement.People have not p...
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Suggestion: People
...eople have employ after the devlopement.People have not problem like pollution and any...
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Suggestion: Author
... whether is very nice after in the city.Author cannot be suggested after build this ne...
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Suggestion: and
... people have not any problem are occure and and development and profit will be gain to ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...and profit will be gain to the city. Therefore I conclude that Any city have developem...
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Line 11, column 93, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
... to the manufacturing new plant It will affects the city and very difficulty have occur...
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Line 11, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he city and very difficulty have occures after its developement.Its is not the ve...
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Suggestion: Its
...ty have occures after its developement.Its is not the very high reason if compay h...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.281385281385 0.25644967241 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.170995670996 0.15541462614 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.047619047619 0.0836205057962 57% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0887445887446 0.0520304965353 171% => OK
Pronouns: 0.021645021645 0.0272364105082 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.145021645022 0.125424944231 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0411255411255 0.0416121511921 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7478476136 2.79052419416 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0151515151515 0.026700313972 57% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.12987012987 0.113004496875 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0194805194805 0.0255425247493 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.004329004329 0.0127820249294 34% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2535.0 2731.13054187 93% => OK
No of words: 439.0 446.07635468 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77448747153 6.12365571057 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.57801047555 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.300683371298 0.378187486979 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214123006834 0.287650121315 74% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157175398633 0.208842608468 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107061503417 0.135150697306 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7478476136 2.79052419416 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 207.018472906 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.325740318907 0.469332199767 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 35.9623212953 52.1807786196 69% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 20.039408867 40% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 54.875 23.2022227129 237% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 121.787147824 57.7814097925 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 316.875 141.986410481 223% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.875 23.2022227129 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.25 0.724660767414 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.14285714286 117% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 3.58251231527 809% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 76.2873006834 51.9672348444 147% => OK
Elegance: 1.66153846154 1.8405768891 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370919995144 0.441005458295 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.336177471088 0.135418324435 248% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.13325008421 0.0829849096947 161% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.880834143312 0.58762219726 150% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157957065954 0.147661913831 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.253992925411 0.193483328276 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659087480567 0.0970749176394 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.568939210619 0.42659136922 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113712720716 0.0774707102158 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281415600458 0.312017818177 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636586091279 0.0698173142475 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.33743842365 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 6.87684729064 102% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 6.46551724138 15% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 7.0 5.36822660099 130% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 14.657635468 55% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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