Super Screen Moive Production Company
The Super Screen Moive Production Company is decided to invest a huge amount of its budget for reaching to the public through advertisement as they are not getting enough of prospective viewers. Even though there is an increase in the percentage of postive reviews by movie reveiwers, the contents of these reviews are not up to their mark. So they arrived at the conclusion that the problem was not with their quality of movie but with public's lack of awareness.
To my view, the Super Screen Movie Production Company is taking a good intiative to make aware of public about their good quality movie. And they are ready to allocate a greater share of their budget to reaching the pubic through advertisments to make them aware of their good quality movies.
As the Super Screen Movie Production Company, have undergone a market survey about this, it can be clearly noticed that the problem lies not the their quality of movies but with the public's lack of awareness in judging the movie. To my mind, I would like to recommend the intiative taking by the Production Company for the welfare of the company.
It can be substantiate that everyone is doing business to become a success in their life. So the Super Screen Movie Production Company, is doing their best to make their company a big success in all views.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'public'?
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...r share of their budget to reaching the pubic through advertisments to make them awar...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...early noticed that the problem lies not the their quality of movies but with the publics ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.295081967213 0.25644967241 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.135245901639 0.15541462614 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0573770491803 0.0836205057962 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0327868852459 0.0520304965353 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.077868852459 0.0272364105082 286% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.147540983607 0.125424944231 118% => OK
Participles: 0.0409836065574 0.0416121511921 98% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.5112094001 2.79052419416 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0491803278689 0.026700313972 184% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.114754098361 0.113004496875 102% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0122950819672 0.0255425247493 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0127820249294 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1325.0 2731.13054187 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 229.0 446.07635468 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78602620087 6.12365571057 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.57801047555 85% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.340611353712 0.378187486979 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.248908296943 0.287650121315 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.126637554585 0.208842608468 61% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0786026200873 0.135150697306 58% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5112094001 2.79052419416 90% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 207.018472906 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480349344978 0.469332199767 102% => OK
Word variations: 42.9264137153 52.1807786196 82% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.039408867 45% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 25.4444444444 23.2022227129 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9401852149 57.7814097925 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.222222222 141.986410481 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 23.2022227129 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.724660767414 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.58251231527 84% => OK
Readability: 50.3352741388 51.9672348444 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.96666666667 1.8405768891 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203220544946 0.441005458295 46% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.186702091058 0.135418324435 138% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.088983796362 0.0829849096947 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.748969577292 0.58762219726 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0750978507229 0.147661913831 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121752553125 0.193483328276 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121337606188 0.0970749176394 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.365059391121 0.42659136922 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0583618017763 0.0774707102158 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155556024287 0.312017818177 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035772445142 0.0698173142475 51% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.33743842365 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.87684729064 29% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.82512315271 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 6.46551724138 77% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 5.36822660099 37% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.82389162562 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 14.657635468 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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More content wanted. For issue essays, around 450 words, for argument essays, around 400 words.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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