94. The effectiveness of a country's leaders is best measured by examining the well-being of that country's
citizens.
It is quite common that the effectiveness of a country’s leader is measured by examining the well-being of that country’s citizens. People quickly judge their leader’s abilities by every day ordinary life on their own. Some people might think it was bad choice on the last presidential election, others might not. However, I would like to consider “effectiveness of a leader” more impacts after the leader terminates the term. Also, let us think about what the “well-being of the citizens”.
It has shown that many respected leaders around the world have proved to be successful after...
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Sentence: In conclusion, it is all up to individual citizens whether their leader is effective or not depending on each individuals experience, social statues, or political tendency.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to each and individuals
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