College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.

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College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.

Students should choose the field of study that interests them rather than choosing the field of study which has numerous jobs in the field because students are unlikely to succeed if they want to that disinterests them.

If students choose the field that they aren't interested in, then they are not able to advance in that particular field because of lack of interest in that field.There is no proper advancement in their career if the student has no interest in a field they have choosen, eventhough there are numerous jobs in that field.There are more chances of advancement if a student chooses the field that they are interested upon. For example, suppose if you choose your favorite subject that interests you in your academics, then it is more probable that you are going to succeed in that subject because you have penchant for that subject.As a result, more chances of advancement in your particular field of study.

On the contrary, If students choose thier subject in a random fashion considering the availability of jobs, then they need to learn the subjects from scratch in which they aren't interested in.It takes more time and resources because you need to adjust to the environment.And it also takes more time to grasp information in the field that disinterests them.

But if the students are interested to congregate the fields of study, one that interests them and the other that they feel interesting.So there are more chances of inventing new things, which thereby helps in cognitive thinking skills.Our brain functions well when we are trying to learn something new because it needs more grasping power to capture the information in the brain.

Finally, students should choose the field of study that interests them rather than choosing the field depending on the availability of jobs in that field.If there are fewer number of jobs in your favorite field of study, then need to create our chances by bringing advancements in your field of study.

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Sentence: There is no proper advancement in their career if the student has no interest in a field they have choosen, eventhough there are numerous jobs in that field.
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Sentence: On the contrary, If students choose thier subject in a random fashion considering the availability of jobs, then they need to learn the subjects from scratch in which they aren't interested in.
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