"The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your o

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"The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "

Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.

Everyone in this world has insatiable curiosities whether it is at getting more wealth or when purchasing a product. Their curiosities is creating conflicts with the general welfare of the people.

Firstly, when i would like to purchase an electronic product that i am penchant at looking the features of the product. But the manufacturers try to sell the product at a higher cost. Moreover, even normal people who want to use a product congregated with plethora of features is not able to afford due to its higher cost. For example,in my view, when i want to purchase a smartphone which has specifications that support my need; the manufacturer, on the other hand, wants to get surplus profits. Eventually, the cost of the product is high. Thus, in this way it is creating conflicts with the welfare of the general public.

In addition, the company registers its name in the stock broking market. But we as an investor, who are insatiable of getting more rich are investing in it. However, the people who are the investors are not getting the outcome they have invested in. Furthermore, the companies usually provide dividends to its customers when their earnings are at large.

In sum, the corporations should also consider generating profits; but they should also think whether the general public can afford it. So in this way, the corporations can make satiate their customers without compromising profits.

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No. of Words: 236 350

Minimum 250 words wanted.

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Score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
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No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 236 350
No. of Characters: 1143 1500
No. of Different Words: 125 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.919 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.843 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.787 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 87 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 26 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.857 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.63 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.786 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.333 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.561 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.08 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5

I thought I would get at least a 3.5 out of 6. I have done better in expressing ideas when compared to other essays that I have submitted for grading on testbig.I don't know what went wrong.I wonder how number of words and number of paragraphs are taken into account rather than the content of the paragraphs.What went wrong in my essay?