Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed."
The issue of freedom of choice of a student is indeed a debatable one. On one hand while students must be given the freedom to choose the career path they wish to follow, the paternalistic role of educational institutions must also be considered .While many students assert that they are wise and mature enough to make their own decisions regarding their future plans, detractors say that educational institutions are the perfect judges of a student’s ability and must hence dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed. After a complete analysis ,I firmly ...
Subscribe as testbig VIP readers and get unlimited access to essays on the top list.
Sentence: Also since teachers are abreast with the latest developments they are in a better position to chooses careers for children based on future trends and hence dissuade students from taking up fields that have little or no scope in the future
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to to and chooses
flaws;
No. of Words: 551 350
Don't put a space before punctuation marks.
Always put a space after punctuation marks. E-rater is sensitive.
It is on top list:
http://www.testbig.com/essay-categories/gmatgre
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 10 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 552 350
No. of Characters: 2644 1500
No. of Different Words: 239 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.847 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.79 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.582 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 196 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 138 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 91 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.642 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.619 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.321 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.541 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.128 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5