GRE Issue 123
The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Leadership now is valued as a necessary talent for the elite of our society. Here is the question: how to educate them about leadership? One aspect of leadership is about how to understand competition and cooperation since most of the processes to successes are via these two means. The speaker of this issue considers the best way for leadership education is to instill in them only the sense of cooperation. I concede he is right to some extent, but competition is also necessary for leadership.
A good leader definitely needs to understand the meaning of cooperation and know well about the ski...
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Sentence: The leader is here for solving this sort of problems: he should be capable of unify the team members focusing on the same target and motivate them for the best performance.
Description: The token of is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to of and unify
flaws:
No. of Words: 609 350 (less words in real exams. write the essay in half an hour)
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 609 350
No. of Characters: 2919 1500
No. of Different Words: 274 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.968 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.793 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.672 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 200 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 153 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 101 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 79 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.36 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.115 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.56 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.291 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.501 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.182 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5