GRE Issue 39
College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
It may be true that as college students, we are caught between our interest and jobs. While pursuing what we like sounds riveting and cheer us without rational sense, just as what the statement shows to us, we must take our future into consideration, if we want to survive in the society. That is to say, we should keep balance between interest and survival pressure by using all the information we can get to make a decision.
It is a universally acknowledged truth that interest maximizes one’s capacity and potential. Interest is something in our mental that always let us in a great exciteme...
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