GRE Issue 46
Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
We always value education a most important issue and expect the educational organizations to do the best to guarantee a good one for every single child. While in many situations our expectations are reasonable, sometimes the responsibility we expect the institutions to undertake is somehow exorbitant. This issue believes universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study. Although I concede the opinion in this issue is worth thinking about sometimes, in most situations I do not agree with this point.
Admittedly, taking several course...
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Sentence: Secondly, increasingly appearance of verge subjects requires us to take more interactive disciplines.
Description: The fragment , increasingly appearance is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace increasingly with adjective
flaws:
No. of Words: 501 350
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.275 0.35
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 24 15
No. of Words: 501 350
No. of Characters: 2553 1500
No. of Different Words: 249 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.731 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.096 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.835 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 189 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 155 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 106 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 70 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.391 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.583 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.275 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.478 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.101 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5