Issue Essay
"Being occasionally dishonest is a good way to maintain relationship with your friends and loved ones"
Is honesty always the best policy? To answer this we must understand what honesty is, honesty is the virtue which frees from deceit and being never afraid of telling the truth. When you build a relationship you build is primarily on love but the foundation of any relationship is laid on trust, the fact that can trust someone with everything that is yours is the very reason a person enters into a relationship, it gives you a feel of never being alone again because now you have someone to look after you and help you when you need it the most. Relationships make humans who we are, a social animal...
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Sentence: When you enter into a relationship you surrender all the facades you put up in front of the world and to that one person you reveal your natural self and the acceptance of who you are makes you feel loved.
Description: The word who is not usually used as a WH-pronoun, accusative
Suggestion: Refer to who
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No. of Words: 666 350 (write the essay in half an hour)
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 666 350
No. of Characters: 2909 1500
No. of Different Words: 286 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.08 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.368 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.348 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 167 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 44 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 33.3 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 21.408 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.45 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.317 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.531 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.205 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5