Although the author states his reasons for ensuring that having a local jazz club is profitable, yet some solid evidence are required to make sure that the mentioned reasons apply to a local jazz club in Monoreo and guarantee a good market.
First of all, the fact that the nearest jazz club is far from Monoreo does not necessarily imply that having one in the city is needed or desired. In fact, perhaps exactly the reverse, the reason that this club is away from Monoreo is that market is satisfying in Monoreo or its vicinity. For instance, if the author had stated that he has talked to the ow...
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Sentence: But some evidence should be present that indicate presence of such fans in Monoreo will brought C-note a good amount of money.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, past participle
Suggestion: Refer to will and brought
Argument 1 -- OK
Argument 2 -- OK
Argument 3 -- OK
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 474 350
No. of Characters: 2185 1500
No. of Different Words: 202 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.666 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.61 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.45 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 145 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 107 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 31.6 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.223 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.391 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.627 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.19 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5