Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain. 4:37
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Forests are precious gift for humans from nature as they provide us alot of benefits.We can not compare the benefit given by forests to benefits from economic gain.Natural resources are far beneficial compare to any other things.We get alot of benefits like conversion of toxic gases, food and life cycle balance etc.As we know now we are in dearth of wilderness areas so to maintains benefits and life cycle balance.We should protect the remaining wilderness area by implementing strict rules.
As we know that animals play an important role in our food and life cycle and we also know that fauna depends on flora.Some of the animals species are on the verge of extinction, because of deforestation.For example, Tigers are on the verge of extinction and we know that how important are tigers for life cycle.Peoples are demolishing forest for their immediate benefits.But we are not thinking about coming generation.How our coming generation will survive with environmental imbalance.We know very well the effect of imbalance in life cycle.Imbalance in life cycle will force to extinct the human race.
Other important aspect of the forest is conversion of toxic gases to harmless gas.Due to industrialization carbon dioxide and other toxic gases emission rate have increased to danger level.Forest are the only thing they can save us from this environmental imbalance.In cities we can already see the effect of these gases in form of cloud.Forests also protect us from dangerous rays of sun.Those rays are very dangerous for our skin.For example,some countries doctor have already reported the case of skin cancer due to sun dangerous rays .From forest,We also get one of the most important thing of life in the form of water.One of the important factor for rain is forest.
To conclude, I would say that it should be our primary objective to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.Life comes above all factors.If there is no life then there no point of economic development.We are also responsible to give a good living environment to our future generation.So to protect the remaining wilderness area we should also implement new strict rule.We should also take this as our moral responsibility.
Sentence: Forests are precious gift for humans from nature as they provide us alot of benefits.We can not compare the benefit given by forests to benefits from economic gain.Natural resources are far beneficial compare to any other things.We get alot of benefits like conversion of toxic gases, food and life cycle balance etc.As we know now we are in dearth of wilderness areas so to maintains benefits and life cycle balance.We should protect the remaining wilderness area by implementing strict rules.
Description: The fragment precious gift for is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Description: A noun, singular, proper is not usually followed by an adjective
Suggestion: Refer to . and Natural
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to beneficial and compare
Description: The token to is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to to and maintains
Sentence: As we know that animals play an important role in our food and life cycle and we also know that fauna depends on flora.Some of the animals species are on the verge of extinction, because of deforestation.For example, Tigers are on the verge of extinction and we know that how important are tigers for life cycle.Peoples are demolishing forest for their immediate benefits.But we are not thinking about coming generation.How our coming generation will survive with environmental imbalance.We know
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to animals and species
Sentence: Other important aspect of the forest is conversion of toxic gases to harmless gas.Due to industrialization carbon dioxide and other toxic gases emission rate have increased to danger level.Forest are the only thing they can save us from this environmental imbalance.In cities we can already see the effect of these gases in form of cloud.Forests also protect us from dangerous rays of sun.Those rays are very dangerous for our skin.For example,some countries doctor have already reported the case of
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to gases and emission
Description: The fragment the only thing is not usually preceded by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to countries and doctor
Sentence: To conclude, I would say that it should be our primary objective to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.Life comes above all factors.If there is no life then there no point of economic development.We are also responsible to give a good living environment to our future generation.So to protect the remaining wilderness area we should also implement new strict rule.We should also take this as our moral
Description: An existential there is not usually followed by an article
Suggestion: Refer to there and no
Description: The word moral is not usually used as a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to moral
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.857 0.12
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 15
No. of Words: 396 350
No. of Characters: 1871 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.461 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.725 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.588 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 119 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 56.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 34.28 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.857 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.432 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.714 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.232 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5