1) The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
Over centuries the pace of life is increasing but over previous two decades it has increased exponentially. The author claims the increasing pace of life has done more harm than good. I would partially agree with the author and would explore some of its positive aspects also.
As the saying goes, “Excess of anything is bad”, the same applies to pace of life. The more we earn, the greater we need to think about its security. The way of living has changed significantly over years. The advancement in technology is the major factor propagating this growth. 50 years ago, our ancestors would have never imagined the life scenario we are into. The changed lifestyle, fooding habits, daily routine, expectations, values everything has changed . If we wonder over it, we ourselves would be amazed to assess the degree of change. When we were younger, i.e if we go a generation backward, we will find that life was simple and happy as compared to now. Though facilities were also less but the satisfaction level in people were more.
At the same time they say, “If change is the source of your growth, why not change”. Change is always for moving forward and towards better. The technology itself is solely responsible for rapid change, it has increased facilities for us, a better education, globalization, industrialization and better modes of transport and communication. In today speedy life, we are all in a constant race of defeating our opponents and have a better quality of living. Striving for growth is good, but we must keep our cultural values intact. We would not be able to handle multiple jobs easily without computers and world wide web, they have made our lives super convenient and accessible for all. We can instantly handle multiple conferences at same time . We can book a cab on click of a button. However, this convenience and comfort is counterbalanced by the ill effects of it. Stress and no time for relaxing are major issues people face due to increased pace of life. Also, relationships today are more of a web based bonding rather than personal and emotional attachment.
The physical ailments, sedentary diseases have increased for working hours sitting in their offices. Also, the average life expectancy has decreased over years. For examples, mobile phones are biggest boon of technology but at the same time, it is also a cause of much unwanted stress. The advent of social media has increased our number of friends but decreased our bonding with our close friends. Rather than meeting someone in person we today prefer to have video chat or a whatsapp call. The fast pace of life has reduced cohesion in society. However, in professional areas, where we need to deliver a task within given period, we need things at one touch and one click so that we can meet up our timelines. The benefit fast pace of life has that it has increased the potential that can be extracted from an individual.
To sum the argument, the increasing pace of life has created problems but not in totality. It has also alleviated many problems with help of technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ld explore some of its positive aspects also. As the saying goes, 'Excess of...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... As the saying goes, 'Excess of anything is bad', the same applies ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g has changed significantly over years. The advancement in technology is the major ...
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Suggestion: .
...ectations, values everything has changed . If we wonder over it, we ourselves woul...
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...d facilities for us, a better education, globalization, industrialization and bet...
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...handle multiple conferences at same time . We can book a cab on click of a button....
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dle multiple conferences at same time . We can book a cab on click of a button. Ho...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...than personal and emotional attachment. The physical ailments, sedentary disease...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the biggest'.
Suggestion: are the biggest
...ver years. For examples, mobile phones are biggest boon of technology but at the same time...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.156666666667 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0933333333333 0.0880659088768 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.05 0.0497285424764 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.07 0.0444667217837 157% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.116666666667 0.12292977631 95% => OK
Participles: 0.055 0.0406280797675 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77148869921 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.015 0.030933414821 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00166666666667 0.0016655270985 100% => OK
Determiners: 0.075 0.0997080785238 75% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0183333333333 0.0249443105267 73% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00666666666667 0.0148568991511 45% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3114.0 2732.02544248 114% => OK
No of words: 527.0 452.878318584 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90891840607 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339658444023 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.250474383302 0.280924506359 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176470588235 0.200843997647 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123339658444 0.132149295362 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77148869921 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 219.290929204 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540796963947 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 66.9810743099 55.4138127331 121% => OK
How many sentences: 33.0 20.6194690265 160% => OK
Sentence length: 15.9696969697 23.380412469 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.234481524 59.4972553346 56% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3636363636 141.124799967 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9696969697 23.380412469 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.181818181818 0.674092028746 27% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 41.0171352999 51.4728631049 80% => OK
Elegance: 1.48795180723 1.64882698954 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364171985713 0.391690518653 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0893964275291 0.123202303941 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0738628708318 0.077325440228 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.426962606854 0.547984918172 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124408573114 0.149214159877 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124941056283 0.161403998019 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647202065812 0.0892212321368 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.379116168048 0.385218514788 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.021117734389 0.0692045440612 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264998666259 0.275328986314 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00980402588693 0.0653680567796 15% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.4325221239 182% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 15.0 7.22455752212 208% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.5995575221 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.