16. Some people believe that in order to be effective, political leaders must yield to public opinion and abandon principle for the sake of compromise. Others believe that the most essential quality of an effective leader is the ability to remain consistently committed to particular principles and objectives.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Since political leaders are in charge of executing significant policies of a nation, it is important role to be an effective leader. Therefore it is debatable whether a leader easily compromise his/her principle toward the public is recommendable or a leader strictly committed to his/her own rules is. When considering the indicator of assessing effective leaders, I believe the achievements can be crucial and not vacillating leaders tend to beget better achievements.
Political leaders are expected to improve the general well-being of a country’s people. Therefore, leaders should put high priority in seizing current issues and suggesting relevant solutions in forms of introducing or amending policies. Nowadays, youth unemployment rate is rising and it has been considered as major driver hampering economic sustainability. In this situation, any political leaders, regardless of their main goals in their political career, have to involve in implementing pertinent solutions to resolve imminent crisis.
However, to keep changing political principle can result in detrimental consequences as political career path. Currently, a vast majority of politicians are registered to specific political parties like Hillary Clinton run for president election as a representative of Democratic Party and Donald Trump for the Republican Party in the US. Politicians involved in specific political party have to pursue policies which align to their political norms. When a politician deviates from his/her party with anomalous remarks on some policies based on personal thoughts, it would result in diminished power over the other parties as well as losing own supporters. Consequently, this would result in losing in presidency election and losing a grand opportunity to achieve more as a national leader for five years.
Additionally, many politicians remembered and respected for a long time among people have a strong achievement based on relentless and strong belief in his/her principles. Kim Dae-jung, the first and only laureate of Nobel Peace Prize in South Korea, is well-known for his arduous work intended to alleviate tensions between North and South Korea. His long concerns for human rights, unification of two countries were often attacked from the opposite political parties and even citizens for supporting Communism and spending tremendous amount of money to North Korea. However, his work eventually contributed to accomplishing family meeting who left each other in Korean War and this contribution was praised from worldwide.
In conclusion, for political leaders to achieve more to become effective leaders, it is recommendable to stick to their own principles and proceed with relentless hard work. Yet the principles should be contributed to the well-being of general people of their own.
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Essay evaluation report
it is important role
it is an important role
flaws:
It is not well organized. The third paragraph should be the second paragraph, while the second paragraph should be the third paragraph.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 428 350
No. of Characters: 2343 1500
No. of Different Words: 235 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.548 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.474 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.039 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 190 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 153 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 120 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 88 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.778 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.537 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.444 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.309 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.563 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.117 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...portant role to be an effective leader. Therefore it is debatable whether a leader easily...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 770, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ing a grand opportunity to achieve more as a national leader for five years. A...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'in conclusion', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260775862069 0.240241500013 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.165948275862 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.137931034483 0.0880659088768 157% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0344827586207 0.0497285424764 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0323275862069 0.0444667217837 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.122844827586 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0668103448276 0.0406280797675 164% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.11819212165 2.79330140395 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0409482758621 0.030933414821 132% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0625 0.0997080785238 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0129310344828 0.0249443105267 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00862068965517 0.0148568991511 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2830.0 2732.02544248 104% => OK
No of words: 424.0 452.878318584 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.67452830189 6.0361032391 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.469339622642 0.366273622748 128% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.384433962264 0.280924506359 137% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.294811320755 0.200843997647 147% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.216981132075 0.132149295362 164% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11819212165 2.79330140395 112% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 219.290929204 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570754716981 0.48968727796 117% => OK
Word variations: 68.2432931488 55.4138127331 123% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.5555555556 23.380412469 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0215594097 59.4972553346 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.222222222 141.124799967 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 23.380412469 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 61.998951782 51.4728631049 120% => OK
Elegance: 1.93518518519 1.64882698954 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446913102872 0.391690518653 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108890363553 0.123202303941 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.068276562947 0.077325440228 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.54175915131 0.547984918172 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.107736680757 0.149214159877 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168982738205 0.161403998019 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835075192211 0.0892212321368 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.287734538012 0.385218514788 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.024352266301 0.0692045440612 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297952059665 0.275328986314 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798413078807 0.0653680567796 122% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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