In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
The intensiveness of anything can lead to more of negative side. It has to decided about the field of intensive research. When the Hero or role model needs to be decided for the society, it really requires in-depth information about the person who will become the most important aspect of the world.
It can be said that a hero is made by the people around the person, but it is also an achievement for a human being. There is people from history who had proved their mettle and heroic performance in their field, but the extreme coverage of media has taken them down to ground. Lance Armstrong, 7 times Tour'D France competition champion, was a great leader of his field and followed by huge number of fans around the globe. Later, He failed in one of the dope test and found out that Armstrong was taking some illegal drugs, banned by the authority. He was a true hero until the harsh veracity came into reality. Hero is someone considered as next to God in our society, as the virtue of it, we need the coverage to find out the real character of a person whether he fits to the role or not.
One can argue with the personal life obscurity of the hero of society, but some points has to be cleared for the people about their hero. The people can lead to blind faith on him that will be a chaos in many ways. Vijay Mallya was also a successful businessman followed by many of youngsters of India, until the scams came out to the fans in his business. Bank loans and forgery had turned the sights to criminal for him. It all comes after the media intervention in many of his cases and properties.
Admittedly, there has to be a hero for the society which can be set as a role model for the upcoming generations, for the betterment of the society, but it has to be articulated about the person, we're following. There is no perfect human being and everyone has some flaws, in addition to it, if it is clearly stated and admitted by the society one can come up as a hero of the society.
There is dire need of people from the society who can be seen as hero but the thorough research is one factor, that can not be overlooked in the society. The world has more of corrupt and negative people and it needs extraordinary people who can vanish the negativity from the society and becomes the leader that changes the world for the goodness.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'really', 'so', 'as to', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236673773987 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.157782515991 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0597014925373 0.0880659088768 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0213219616205 0.0497285424764 43% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0511727078891 0.0444667217837 115% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136460554371 0.12292977631 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0426439232409 0.0406280797675 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41525393334 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0298507462687 0.030933414821 97% => OK
Particles: 0.00852878464819 0.0016655270985 512% => OK
Determiners: 0.123667377399 0.0997080785238 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0234541577825 0.0249443105267 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0191897654584 0.0148568991511 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2343.0 2732.02544248 86% => OK
No of words: 433.0 452.878318584 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41108545035 6.0361032391 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.267898383372 0.366273622748 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.177829099307 0.280924506359 63% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.127020785219 0.200843997647 63% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0692840646651 0.132149295362 52% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41525393334 2.79330140395 86% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 219.290929204 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464203233256 0.48968727796 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.9974189043 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0555555556 23.380412469 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.912904455 59.4972553346 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.166666667 141.124799967 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0555555556 23.380412469 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.674092028746 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.21349557522 0% => OK
Readability: 41.8384654863 51.4728631049 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.80555555556 1.64882698954 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224929023642 0.391690518653 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.142104542158 0.123202303941 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0781627035936 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.601819218063 0.547984918172 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151771957298 0.149214159877 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116246877053 0.161403998019 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605832897927 0.0892212321368 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.531073634862 0.385218514788 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0312199539509 0.0692045440612 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178878008526 0.275328986314 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425482004818 0.0653680567796 65% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.