All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Consultancies thrive by helping out other organisations which face some trouble figuring out some tasks by themselves. One may wonder how it works this way as it may seem counter-intuitive at the first glance. The company's employees should be able to delineate and work out the exact issues that are being faced. And this would deem the consultancies worthless. However trends show exactly the opposite and there may be multiple reasons for the same. I agree that insiders should be able to mitigate situations efficiently however there are many more situations where external help is unavoidable.
Firstly, employees within the organisation often have an idea of what tasks are going on wrong or inefficiently. Managers may overlook the points highlighted by individuals or the employees themselves may be timorous in bringing out the same. Consider for example a hotel management group where the staff may be reluctant to share an idea which infact would prove beneficial to the operations of the management. However this isn't always necessary as ideas may turn out to be biased as they are coming up within the company.
Secondly, a company starts off with a dedicated vision and mission.The projects that they involve themselves in may also require knowledge and expertise on subjects outside of their scope. For the company employees to develop such knowledge it would take a much longer time and using some of the company resources to fund consultants often proves to be profitable. Such expertise is sought from external sources which are these consultancies. They comprise of multiple members with a strong knowledge in varied subjects that come of help to organisations in such predicaments.
Finally, an important point to consider is how deep the employees have buried themselves into the work. Sometimes tasks become so gruelling and involved that certain easy ways to solve a problem exist but can't be found easily. one requires an out of the box methodology for thinking or maybe just a new angle to look at the situation from to get a quick and easy fix.
Overall, consultant bring with them a host of advantages inclusive of a fair approach, new way of thinking and high expertise on the field which summed up override the intuitive notion that employees would have a better idea or solutions to help mitigate an issue.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21271393643 0.240241500013 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.166259168704 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110024449878 0.0880659088768 125% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0464547677262 0.0497285424764 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0317848410758 0.0444667217837 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110024449878 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0366748166259 0.0406280797675 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.8861545438 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0342298288509 0.030933414821 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0195599022005 0.0016655270985 1174% => OK
Determiners: 0.110024449878 0.0997080785238 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0342298288509 0.0249443105267 137% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0244498777506 0.0148568991511 165% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2344.0 2732.02544248 86% => OK
No of words: 386.0 452.878318584 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0725388601 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347150259067 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.274611398964 0.280924506359 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.220207253886 0.200843997647 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145077720207 0.132149295362 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8861545438 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 219.290929204 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546632124352 0.48968727796 112% => OK
Word variations: 61.6604799895 55.4138127331 111% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4444444444 23.380412469 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3875537131 59.4972553346 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.222222222 141.124799967 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 23.380412469 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.674092028746 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 48.9055843408 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.47 1.64882698954 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291537563185 0.391690518653 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0792026471748 0.123202303941 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0519445219283 0.077325440228 67% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.520680984842 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.16486062842 0.149214159877 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108075182465 0.161403998019 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798389008388 0.0892212321368 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.291788832408 0.385218514788 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0670509765549 0.0692045440612 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182838915774 0.275328986314 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580062432772 0.0653680567796 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.