All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary. Write a response in which you disc

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All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with these statements and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statements might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your positions.

Companies sometimes must go through a series of changes in order to improve growth of the company, to ultimately garner more profits. For sound change, companies often hire outside consultants who could suggest ways that would allow for smoother and more efficient operation within a company. However, critics oppose the employment of such consultants, instead contending that a company should make time to listen more to its employees. While company employees certainly do offer valuable insight into the inner operations of a company, outside consultants can offer a greater benefit to its betterment.

There is a certain merit to relying on consultants. Outside consultants are hired, as per their description, from outside the company, meaning that they may have experiences from other employment opportunities that might be beneficial to the company. These experiences, if positive, would be proven accounts of company improvement, and therefore employers could choose to implement these ideas. Similarly, outside consultants may be able to suggest more creative recommendations that do not necessarily come from experience, but from a creative mind, especially since creativity is highly valued in a workplace. Offering suggestions, however, is not all that outside consultants have to offer. Consultants are trained professionals: there is a certain analytical process to their vocation. For example, consultants could conduct interviews with company employees, and gain some insight into establishment procedures that are, more or less, privy to these employees. Similarly, they could interview customers, suppliers, and even the business administration itself. Through these interviews, consultants could gather all the information collected and use it to draft different recommendations for change. A great advantage to these consultants is that because they were initially not part of the company, they have no particular affiliation to it, and therefore observe company proceedings or interview various peoples through an objective lens. This way, if a particular difficult change must be done, they would not be so begrudging proposing such an idea, and usually, company bosses would be willing to agree. These ideas could include recommending downsizing the company, or even merging with another company—two very sudden changes.

That does not mean to say that company employees are not a potentially great source for consultancy. As aforementioned, they are quite aware of many of the company proceedings that their employers might not be conscious to. Employees who have the opportunity to be heard by their employers might direct changes that would improve working conditions for themselves. Moreover, if their employers were to hire outside consultants who, as well, are not knowledgeable of employee relations and other employee matters, they might as well set impossible standards or recommend seemingly impossible changes. For example, to improve work efficiency, consultants could suggest decreasing the time for breaks or even limit the number of vacation days per employee. However, these employees, more conscious of their needs, could suggest that, instead, to increase efficiency, that the company allocates different lunch breaks to a set number of people. This way, there would not be such a great emphasis on work, and employees could have some time to relax and refresh. Another example could suggest that employees who are working with materials might see the benefit in changing to low-cost materials that are equally functional. Within time, experienced employees could be promoted to consultants themselves, offering recommendation to improving the organization.

There are, however, downsides to both parties. Outside consultants are costly: a company that wants to do well would hire several consultants, each demanding expensive paychecks for recommendations drawn from minds enriched with experience and creativity. Additionally, consultants often clash with the employees because of the former’s oblivion to the different relations and experiences these employees have. Sometimes, consultants do not even take the time to listen to the employees, and would make suggestions that would harm internal affairs, and missed information could lead to wrong decision-making. However, companies cannot only rely on their employees because there is a certain emotional attachment the latter has that could hinder necessary changes for improvement and growth. Moreover, they lack a certain experience that consultants possess, and may not necessarily be able to think outside the box.

Despite the disadvantages that pertain to them, outside consultants are valuable assets to companies that desire to grow and profit. These consultants acquire a myriad of different ideas collected from a wide experience in the field. As well, because they are trained to consult, they maintain a creative outlook for recommendations and solutions. This is particularly important because they were not part of the company, and therefore, are able to make suggestions that do not come from emotion but through a certain practicality that is intended to profit the company. Meanwhile, they are expensive to hire, and they may not take time to interview employees about the inner workings of the company, perhaps leading to rash decision-making. However, a company should not have to rely solely on its employees. Although they are more knowledgeable about certain internal organizational affairs, they may often make more subjective recommendations that are not necessarily beneficial.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'moreover', 'similarly', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'more or less']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220820189274 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.155625657203 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0820189274448 0.0880659088768 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.080967402734 0.0497285424764 163% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0325972660358 0.0444667217837 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0914826498423 0.12292977631 74% => OK
Participles: 0.0294426919033 0.0406280797675 72% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.14578752864 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0462670872766 0.030933414821 150% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0788643533123 0.0997080785238 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0399579390116 0.0249443105267 160% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.018927444795 0.0148568991511 127% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 5625.0 2732.02544248 206% => OK
No of words: 838.0 452.878318584 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.71241050119 6.0361032391 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.38035590387 4.58838876751 117% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.429594272076 0.366273622748 117% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.383054892601 0.280924506359 136% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.27923627685 0.200843997647 139% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.212410501193 0.132149295362 161% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14578752864 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Unique words: 345.0 219.290929204 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.41169451074 0.48968727796 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.3472651553 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 38.0 20.6194690265 184% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 22.0526315789 23.380412469 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4894433524 59.4972553346 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.026315789 141.124799967 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0526315789 23.380412469 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.342105263158 0.674092028746 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 60.3581208391 51.4728631049 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.26953125 1.64882698954 77% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437536207091 0.391690518653 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0906029806348 0.123202303941 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0599147724162 0.077325440228 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.454971866653 0.547984918172 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118044076264 0.149214159877 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166035263835 0.161403998019 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659361567486 0.0892212321368 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.523289087754 0.385218514788 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0579642184551 0.0692045440612 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.347722225135 0.275328986314 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450646718814 0.0653680567796 69% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.4325221239 211% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 18.0 7.22455752212 249% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 34.0 13.5995575221 250% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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