"All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficient. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary."
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with these statements and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Rome was not built in a day. The path to success of anything or anyone is not an easy journey. It's winding and often hindered by obstacles. To tackle these problems one has to look at the issue in hand from various perspectives. The key to success is the willingness to be open to suggestions and advice. The success of a company is determined similarly. The leaders of the company need to be open to suggestions from all sides. Sometimes the problems faced are inherent, and people related to the company, namely the employees are sufficient to find a solution. However there are times when expert help is required. That is when the company seeks external consultants. While one can say that the employees are professionals who can guarantee effectual change, we cannot conclude that their help is sufficient. External help is required as well.
Consultants give the choice of looking at the problem from a different perspective. Not always can the people related to the problem look from all angles. To improve efficiency of a company, the flaws and setbacks have to be looked at from the point of view of a third person. This is where external consultants come handy. Also, these consultants are experts in their field. They tackle corporate issues and devise solutions for a living. They have immense past experiences and could have proven to be effectual in their previous endeavours with other companies. A particular issue which might seem uncommon to the heads and employees of a complany could be a normal issue to the consultants; they would have faced the exact same issue with other companies. In such cases they can provide relief quickly and effectively.
External consultants also provide exposure to a company. Seeking external help gives them a brief picture of the general global situation. They can also at times provide external contacts which can be prove to be useful at later times. Such contacts and exposure can be obtained only by seeking help from outside. While these consultants can help with a great deal of issues and help improve the efficiency of a company, they might not the internal functioning and the processes involved. They cannot provide solutions for what they don't experience. This is where the help from employees comes handy.
Employees look at issues from a different and yet important perspective. They are a part of the company and they can understand how the company works. Employees can provide suggestions about where the company is lacking and how it has to come forward and help the employees themselves to improve efficiency. Approaching employees for suggestions gives the company a picture of where they are lacking internally. It tells them about the amendments they have to make or the aid which they have to provide to help them. Also approaching employees at times of crisis gives them a sens of importance and dignity. It makes the employees feel special and strengthens the bond between the company and employees.
Whille the employees are required at times, they cannot prove useful to tackle all kinds of issues. An employee can help improve the technical aspects or production processes. But to deal with financial or administrative crisis the company obviously requires external help from consultants. For the success of any entity, it should be open to suggestions and help from all directions. Restricting itself to the aid of a particular group would not prove fruitful. Suggestions from employees are necessary, and so is the aid from external consultants. However a company should ensure to balance both to deliver success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 356, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s of a company is determined similarly. The leaders of the company need to be open ...
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Line 1, column 564, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...yees are sufficient to find a solution. However there are times when expert help is req...
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Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he choice of looking at the problem from a different perspective. Not always can ...
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Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
...lutions for a living. They have immense past experiences and could have proven to be effectual i...
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Line 5, column 534, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... cannot provide solutions for what they dont experience. This is where the help from...
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Line 7, column 518, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...hich they have to provide to help them. Also approaching employees at times of crisi...
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Line 9, column 551, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...o is the aid from external consultants. However a company should ensure to balance both...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, similarly, so, then, third, well, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 58.6224719101 142% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3010.0 2235.4752809 135% => OK
No of words: 597.0 442.535393258 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0418760469 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94303383012 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79831976435 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.400335008375 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 929.7 704.065955056 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 6.24550561798 272% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 42.0 20.2370786517 208% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8357616643 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.6666666667 118.986275619 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 23.4991977007 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.80952380952 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 10.2758426966 224% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149810966784 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450783801262 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425477130355 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984917932344 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220344499934 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 100.480337079 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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