In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
To make important contributions in any field one needs to challenge the accepted norm and provide
a unique solution to an existing problem.Make things simpler and easier is how we define
innovation . The topic poses an interesting question , whether a beginner or an expert , who is more likely
to make important contribution.
An expert is one that has spent considerable amount of time with the subject and is aware of the
literature in and out. While a beginner is someone just starting out , learning the concepts and applying .
A beginner eventually becomes an expert when he persists and specializes .
When any person is in the beginner phase , they encounter new information ,naturally we are more
inquisitive and try to inspect the information from multiple angles. Till now an inclination for a set theory
or belief does not exist . The individual is exploring . Hence as a beginner it is easy to challenge
the norms and question the hypothesis . Digging deeper with persistence and an open mind can pave the way
for major contributions . Hence one school of thoughts is biased towards beginners.
Lets take the example of OYO rooms. The founder Mr Agarwal was just 18 when he founded the company. It is a hotel
aggregator that standardizes maintenance and services. Thus connecting users to cost effective stays where
definite standards are maintained. Mr Agarwal was an amateur in the hotel business but he made a significant mark
in the Indian hotel industry. It changed the way middle class could access reasonable places of stay.
The intermixing of technology with the hotel segment indeed solved the existing problem . Thus being a beginner he was
able to make a major contribution .
Considering the aspect from the expert side , it is universally true that - Any expert was always once a beginner.
There are field experts who leverage the idea and contribute in the meaningful
ways taking the company forward. A graphic design expert works relentlessly to make animations. It can so happen
that a new graphic design software is released that can simplify the process and reduce drawing time significantly.
So the expert goes into beginner mode again to learn the new software and optimally use the new technology to
solve the graphic design tasks. We can note from above that challenges keep evolving and with innovation ,
learning is a life long process , there is no true expert. We needs to keep updating our knowledge and apply
gained experience to achieve quality results.
Thomas Edison tested more than than 10,000 materials to finally select glass for light bulb case with the filament .
he put in continuous effort and with trial and error ultimately succeeded . It is difficult to categorize him
as a beginner or expert . He was man with an aim and perseverance . Any person looking to solve problems
in different fields of inquiry with the dedication and perseverance can make major contribution.
He can be a seasoned expert working with years of experience or a beginner with zeal and new outlook also.
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...or a beginner with zeal and new outlook also.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, look, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2575.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 500.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89534878138 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 808.2 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.2370786517 158% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1712705898 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.46875 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.625 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 31.0 4.97078651685 624% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 47.0 7.80617977528 602% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.83258426966 331% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173194475234 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435849831086 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351110390557 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0475195016923 0.150359130593 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357339643096 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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