The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement above and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how those considerations shape your position.
The statement acclaiming that the best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things is absolutely agreeable. Although, most of the time human mind ignores the commonplace things, it is still surprisingly agreeable that passionate interest arises from things that we encounter in day to day life. We, the so called highly developed primates, are in a hurry to catch hold of a place in the rat-race that is taking place. But, the same rat-race that most of us are running behind fuels the ignorance of the fact that we fail to notice the usual things around us. Even if we fortuitously encounter the things around us we have been trained to ignore them and ultimately we'll move on to a point where we run out of ideas.
Albert Einstein quoted "Any intelligent fool can make things better, more complex and more violent. But it takes a touch of a genius, as a lot of courage. to move in the opposite direction". The epitome of this quote is that, when human mind has been trained to do a work monotonously we loose the natural instinct to create new ideas though we gain sheer "intelligence". But, to be a genius, one should take different perspective in things. Thus, perspective of things can be changed only when he transcends the superstitions and develops a passionate interest thereby gaining a lot more new ideas.
Every living being wants to be successful in one way or the other. It is the natural cue in every living being in this planet to be successful and humans are no exception it it. But, the same instinct drives us insanely towards prejudices. As David Frost says " Don't aim for success. If you want just do what you love and believe in it and it will come naturally" which exactly fits to the main theme of the essay. When we take passion towards everything that we do it is evident that best ideas are born out of it without any doubt.
To sum up, I would suggest that, instead of ignoring the cues that nature gives us, we must do justice to the creation. Thereby, achieving ultimate success with the best ideas acquainted.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ly fits to the main theme of the essay. When we take passion towards everything that...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'well', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214797136038 0.240241500013 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.162291169451 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0811455847255 0.0880659088768 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0501193317422 0.0497285424764 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0715990453461 0.0444667217837 161% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.112171837709 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0381861575179 0.0406280797675 94% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.87983701499 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334128878282 0.030933414821 108% => OK
Particles: 0.00238663484487 0.0016655270985 143% => OK
Determiners: 0.0954653937947 0.0997080785238 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143198090692 0.0249443105267 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0190930787589 0.0148568991511 129% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2101.0 2732.02544248 77% => OK
No of words: 367.0 452.878318584 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72479564033 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.313351498638 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223433242507 0.280924506359 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.149863760218 0.200843997647 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103542234332 0.132149295362 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87983701499 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 219.290929204 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553133514986 0.48968727796 113% => OK
Word variations: 61.7977550477 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.3157894737 23.380412469 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5187874686 59.4972553346 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.578947368 141.124799967 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 23.380412469 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.368421052632 0.674092028746 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 41.6591137244 51.4728631049 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.28571428571 1.64882698954 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374682861888 0.391690518653 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122372304915 0.123202303941 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.120477887944 0.077325440228 156% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489778369662 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166725038765 0.149214159877 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148429820192 0.161403998019 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906868054156 0.0892212321368 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.325360636313 0.385218514788 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0645615139688 0.0692045440612 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24940524966 0.275328986314 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476798531587 0.0653680567796 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.