The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Cooperation - A word which has indepth importance when time come for taking decison. Without it, it is near to impossible to achieve success in life. With cooperation, competition is also needed because without opposing views, a person cannot learn things.
A person can learn things in two ways - either by watching the experiences of others or by experiencing them oneself. Cooperation indulges a sense of other people's experiences and competition imbibes a sense of own's experiences. It is said that "It's better to have people with opposite views than with similar views to be successful in life". This sentence has a lot of importance when it comes to inculcate the values of leadership and alleviate young people's level.
The author claims that instilling a sense of cooperation rather than competition is the best way for a society to ignite young minds for leadership in various fields such as government, industry, etc. I agree to certain extent with the author as cooperation plays a fundamental role when it comes to motivating people. "Everything is fair in love and war", this quote can have a great impact when peopple have the sense of competition at a very younger age. Consider the example of startup -- In today's world, there are many startups which are competing against each other which eventually leads them belittle their competitor and gain flattery by heinous means. At the same time, when MNCs launch a new program, they need cooperation from other companies or startups to grow their program and help them have a greater success. This tells us that cooperation is important for better society.
Imbibing a sense of cooperation is important but competition should not be neglected. A person becomes a leader when he or she have cooperation from every one in his or her team and he has a mindset which makes him above the competitors. Here, competitors plays a important role as they make them person to strategise from a diffferent point of view and make better plans for effective leadership.
In sum, igniting young minds for leadership in any section requires a sense of cooperation along with slight experience of competition. This will help them to become an effective leader in future and help to serve a better society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.259523809524 0.240241500013 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.154761904762 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0857142857143 0.0880659088768 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0190476190476 0.0497285424764 38% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0571428571429 0.0444667217837 129% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.130952380952 0.12292977631 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0285714285714 0.0406280797675 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.91365938139 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0285714285714 0.030933414821 92% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0904761904762 0.0997080785238 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0119047619048 0.0249443105267 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0238095238095 0.0148568991511 160% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2280.0 2732.02544248 83% => OK
No of words: 378.0 452.878318584 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03174603175 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357142857143 0.366273622748 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261904761905 0.280924506359 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193121693122 0.200843997647 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142857142857 0.132149295362 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91365938139 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 219.290929204 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 60.0269258787 55.4138127331 108% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.380412469 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.763847654 59.4972553346 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 141.124799967 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.380412469 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.674092028746 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 47.1904761905 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.81443298969 1.64882698954 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.512493201278 0.391690518653 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0860722377347 0.123202303941 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0600272194394 0.077325440228 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.481664109331 0.547984918172 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0902002010013 0.149214159877 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164434631848 0.161403998019 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104742686491 0.0892212321368 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.279711401599 0.385218514788 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0660751722716 0.0692045440612 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.294122831168 0.275328986314 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093933562728 0.0653680567796 144% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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