The best way to for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is instilling in them a sense of cooperation and not competition.
The author's states that the best way to for a society to prepare its young people for leadership is instilling in them a sense of cooperation and not competition. The author also points out some fields like government and industry where leadership skills are required. It maybe true that good leadership skills is one of the requirement for a certain occupation but not necessarily be the only skill required. So i agree with the statement partially since one should learn on how to cooperate as well as to look on for the competition and how to tackle it.
It is correct that one of the important leadership qualities is cooperation. Cooperation is required for proper team work as team work will help in carrying out any task or functioning of the organisation to be smooth. To become a good leader one must also have other skills such as communication, personality etc. So its just not correct to just focus on inculcating the values of cooperation, but other values should also be taught.
The author gives an example of government where leadership skills are required. For any government to perform or function efficiently, there should be a excellent leader to head the government in the right direction. Here the leader does not face competition except at the of elections. So to lead a government it is necessary to cooperate with everyone and maintain harmony and it requires to face less competition.
But on the other hand the other examples that the author has given mentions industry and other fields. These sectors have a lot competition in the market and it is difficult for one to sustain in such competitive situations. So as leader of any industry one should know how to maintain the trust of the employees and ask for their cooperation in the difficult phase and in addition have the ability to face the competition audaciously.
So the best way to prepare the young people for leadership depends on what kind group or field the person has to lead. Most of the occupations require both the
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'as to', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235616438356 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.156164383562 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0821917808219 0.0880659088768 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0520547945205 0.0497285424764 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.027397260274 0.0444667217837 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128767123288 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0246575342466 0.0406280797675 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89429907846 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0493150684932 0.030933414821 159% => OK
Particles: 0.00547945205479 0.0016655270985 329% => OK
Determiners: 0.117808219178 0.0997080785238 118% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0164383561644 0.0249443105267 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0164383561644 0.0148568991511 111% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2016.0 2732.02544248 74% => OK
No of words: 346.0 452.878318584 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82658959538 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320809248555 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239884393064 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.187861271676 0.200843997647 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150289017341 0.132149295362 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89429907846 2.79330140395 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 219.290929204 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459537572254 0.48968727796 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.8229502561 55.4138127331 84% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 20.3529411765 23.380412469 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6210405749 59.4972553346 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.588235294 141.124799967 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 23.380412469 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.674092028746 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 44.3413804828 51.4728631049 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.6511627907 1.64882698954 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.584840573248 0.391690518653 149% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104021973877 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0659741239551 0.077325440228 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.572198858163 0.547984918172 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135277482124 0.149214159877 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227062961747 0.161403998019 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.154484584027 0.0892212321368 173% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.393495438727 0.385218514788 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0602709921556 0.0692045440612 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.384372920408 0.275328986314 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912886009059 0.0653680567796 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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