The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
What defines a leader? Is is the knowledge needed as per the field or is it the ability to bind together each and everyone and achieve desired results? Most people would agree that it is the latter. People who argue otherwise would want the young people to be only fiercely competitive to achieve leadership roles. After weighing the evidence we can conclude that while, good competition indeed is benifiitial for progress it the sense of coopeartion which helps young people to get preapared best for leadership roles in government, industry or any other field.
A great example of sene of cooperation is in field of military warfare. A spartan army unit was only successful in holding the enire might persian army despite, being less than one hunderedth with coopearation only. A spartan soldier including the genreals relied on the his compatriats on the left and right flank to form a impervious defensive shield to counter the oncoming persian attack. Had they gone for individual glory and competed with the each other, the result of the battle would have been much different.
Although, cooperation is important, it is important to note that a healthy competition is equally important. Great leaders more often than not are born from hardships, especially those encouraged from competition. A 'suvival of fittest' mentality is the mantra to A healthy competition amongst the drivers of ferrari formula 1 team saw them taking up the first as well as the second place in the season. This is particulary intereting because the ferrari drivers cooperated with each other while competing with the rest of the drivers and also racing against each other as well to prove to be a better driver.
In conclusion, its clear with the evidence provided that to instil a sense of cooperation in young people is the best way for a society to prepare them to take up the mantle of a leader in any field.
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... one hunderedth with coopearation only. A spartan soldier including the genreals ...
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...oldier including the genreals relied on the his compatriats on the left and right flank...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'in conclusion', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223495702006 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.157593123209 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.117478510029 0.0880659088768 133% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0487106017192 0.0497285424764 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0286532951289 0.0444667217837 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12893982808 0.12292977631 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0401146131805 0.0406280797675 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78189832286 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0372492836676 0.030933414821 120% => OK
Particles: 0.00573065902579 0.0016655270985 344% => OK
Determiners: 0.12893982808 0.0997080785238 129% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143266475645 0.0249443105267 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00859598853868 0.0148568991511 58% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1912.0 2732.02544248 70% => OK
No of words: 321.0 452.878318584 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95638629283 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355140186916 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.280373831776 0.280924506359 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177570093458 0.200843997647 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1246105919 0.132149295362 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78189832286 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 219.290929204 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576323987539 0.48968727796 118% => OK
Word variations: 63.2853803859 55.4138127331 114% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 22.9285714286 23.380412469 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4127554336 59.4972553346 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.571428571 141.124799967 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9285714286 23.380412469 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.642857142857 0.674092028746 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 50.9659546061 51.4728631049 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.67073170732 1.64882698954 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453092328778 0.391690518653 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.111470250832 0.123202303941 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0864633588542 0.077325440228 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.525956045824 0.547984918172 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.222278395197 0.149214159877 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163201373606 0.161403998019 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131559485278 0.0892212321368 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.354628672413 0.385218514788 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.014826880647 0.0692045440612 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326838768416 0.275328986314 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117805337289 0.0653680567796 180% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.