Everyone in the life dreams to aims higher. Regardless of what or where they belong to in the society, whats their financial, social conditions are.They strive to this dream to come out to a better person in society.Though some follows goals that are defined to come out an eminent person.In my opinion one should pursue their dream to be a scintillating person n the society.
A desire for the human makes him work more efficiently towards their goals. If he/she sets an aim that they wants to achieve in their life even though, that may be an Utopian dream. Efforts towards it seems to be working out pretty much well as compared to the one that may have been chosen as a worthy goal that has made most of the elite's successfull in their carrer. The Outcome turns out to be pretty good and more gratifying that the one that would have been chosen just because it was a benefactor goal.
The reason that the author has provided cannot claimed to be a absolute erroneous free in most of the cases. There are very live examples of the persons that have embark on their dream and are very successful in their carrer today. Such examples are of one of the great batsman in the world, Sachin tendulkar who has crossed through various barrier in order to reach the milestone and success that he has achieved today.Another is famous singer Lata Mangeskar that has followed her passion and we can we where they are now.
Although there are many situations where the dream you pursue are just one of idealistic one that is difficult to achieve to. This seems to turn out to be simply imitation of your friends and comrades that you start following without giving much attention to it.This can result out to be in jeopardizing your future.
In a sum, it can be said that sometimes you pursue the goals that are well enough to rise you better in the society. However this shouldn't be the only option as there are beneficial results with one that always aims to follow mostly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 353.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60339943343 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38922243096 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526912181303 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.7786202336 60.3974514979 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.0 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125913103109 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497687991605 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0218143665675 0.0758088955206 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746512242961 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019824858804 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.8420337079 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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