Claim Major policy decisions should always be left to politicians and other government experts Reason Politicians and other government experts are more informed and thus have better judgment and perspective than do members of the general public

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Claim: Major policy decisions should always be left to politicians and other government experts.

Reason: Politicians and other government experts are more informed and thus have better judgment and perspective than do members of the general public.

Democracy is the system of governance by the entire population where they exercise control through elected representatives. The proposition that major policy decisions to be left to politicians and other government experts due to their better understanding and perspective amounts to undermine the very objective of a democratic system. However, government officials have the entrusted duty to lead the people with their judgement and knowledge in the best interest of the nation. Hence, while they must consider will of the people on matters directly related to them; they should also rely on personal or professional opinions tp formulate major policies when the public will is contrary to the overall interest of the country.

Any Government is a multidimensional complex functioning entity whose decisions have a direct bearing on public life and national welfare. When people vote a Government to power after, say, an economic crisis, corruption scandal of failure of state machinery; they have certain expectations regarding healthcare, sanitation, job opportunities, fuel prices, etc. The Government, then, has a responsibility entrusted on it by the democracy to meet these expectations. Many times, these issues may not seem as relevant or important to the bureaucracy as they are to the people. There may be instances when the officials are willing to invest on a space program in the face of high unemployment or to invest in building a fly-over instead of a hospital when there is an epidemic. Such situations may result in a discord between people and the authority, at times, manifesting in the form of protests, violent agitations or riots thus endangering the social fabric of the state. Therefore, Government officials must consider opinion of general public and their involvement on issues directly affecting them.

However, on many instances, the will of the people may be contrary to the interest of the country. For example, when a curfew or restriction on free movement is imposed due to a terrorist attack or national emergency, people may want them removed regardless of the importance of the step for the security of the state. Or there may be certain tribes willing to settle in environmentally conserved area, thus, threatening the local flora and fauna. Moreover, people may not be well-informed or knowledgeable on some sensitive issues such as defence or foreign policy to form credible opinions. Thus, in these cases, for the security and well-being of the country, officials must certainly rely on their own judgment instead of unquestioningly following public demands.

Furthermore, depending upon the cultural background or education level, public opinion might be tainted by some unethical beliefs of the day. For example, during Lincoln’s reign, the whites believed that the blacks are psychologically inferior to them and that slavery was their natural state. Or in colonial India, child marriage was the norm f the day. Had the contemporary Governments unquestioningly followed the will of the people to make relevant policies, the respective countries would have never evolved into civilized states as they boast today.

However, there may be certain areas such as education, allocation of research funds, child and women rights, etc. where policy making requires unbiased domain expertise. The Government officials and other experts may either be as clueless on these areas as the ordinary multitude or they may hold vested interests. On these areas, therefore, they must invoke external professional consultation instead of relying in addition to personal judgment and public opinion.

In conclusion, the binary recommendation for the politicians or government experts to either depend upon own judgement or on public opinion is inappropriate. Excessive reliance of officials on personal judgment may foster autocratic decisions while unquestioningly toadying to public might pave for ‘populism’. While on matters directly affecting the public life, their opinion must be considered; otherwise, on sensitive issues, Government officials and experts must rely on personal or professional judgment for policy making for the overall welfare of the country.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 620, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'opinions'' or 'opinion's'?
Suggestion: opinions'; opinion's
...d also rely on personal or professional opinions tp formulate major policies when the pu...
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Line 3, column 1032, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ment officials must consider opinion of general public and their involvement on issues directl...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent on issues directly affecting them. However, on many instances, the will of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 87.0 58.6224719101 148% => OK
Nominalization: 32.0 12.9106741573 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3570.0 2235.4752809 160% => OK
No of words: 646.0 442.535393258 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52631578947 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.0414809386 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1247256395 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 305.0 215.323595506 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47213622291 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 1130.4 704.065955056 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5534255419 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.222222222 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9259259259 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244386353538 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672114290884 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771275135 0.0758088955206 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135806490725 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701903744513 0.0667264976115 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 191.0 100.480337079 190% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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