Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The claim stated above seems irreproachable. A lot of the problems in the world cannot be solved by just the laws and legal system without the support of humans themselves. However, the reasoning seems probable for some case but cannot be used to completely justify the claim. The reasoning used somehow tries to undermine the importance of the law in society.
Morals of a person is something that no law can change. A person who is unconcerned about the discomfort of others might park his car in a way which obstructs the parking of another person. No law in the world can deal with all the problems faced by the society at the root levels, but the law is important to define a set of standards by which the citizens should abide. How a person thinks depends on the society he brought up in, however law cannot affect the decision making of all the individuals it can certainly provide a framework within which a society should work.
While the claim seems to be accurate, the reasoning seems rather absolute and seems to question the usability of law across the society. It states that law cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds. It might be true that a law cannot influence what is in people's heart but can surely help to influence the mind of a rational person. A person can decide to not pay rent to his landlord for a given month, but the consequences offered by the law will influences the person's decision making.
Simply stating laws in the constitiuion is also not enough at the same time, what matters most is the enforcement of current laws. There could be a law to prevent littering in public areas, but without enforcement of such a law it remains upto the citizen as to litter or not. At the same time what also matters from enforcement is the process of law making in itself. The subtleties which are ensured by the law, play a major role, while rash driving could be illegal in a country what constitutes as rash driving could be used as a loophole to break the law.
In several countries, law states that after a certain hour at night, loud music is prohibhited, a person unaffected by the society without the presnece of law would play music day and night according to his/her comfort, but due to mere presence of law the person's decision to play loud music is influenced by the law. At the end of the day, it is completely upto humans whether to act as a morally responsible citizen of the society or be a plague in the society. Several problems cannot be solved by the laws, but as stated above in several examples, laws are definitely necessary to influence the society by providing a set of guidelines in which it should function. It would be too naive to assume that laws play no role in affecting the decisions of humans.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 457, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'influence'
Suggestion: influence
...he consequences offered by the law will influences the persons decision making. Simply ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244444444444 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.161111111111 0.157235817809 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.05 0.0880659088768 57% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0462962962963 0.0497285424764 93% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0222222222222 0.0444667217837 50% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140740740741 0.12292977631 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0388888888889 0.0406280797675 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.56794651126 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0314814814815 0.030933414821 102% => OK
Particles: 0.00185185185185 0.0016655270985 111% => OK
Determiners: 0.140740740741 0.0997080785238 141% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0407407407407 0.0249443105267 163% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0222222222222 0.0148568991511 150% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2768.0 2732.02544248 101% => OK
No of words: 498.0 452.878318584 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55823293173 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.58838876751 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234939759036 0.280924506359 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132530120482 0.200843997647 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0923694779116 0.132149295362 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56794651126 2.79330140395 92% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 219.290929204 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441767068273 0.48968727796 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.2541464673 55.4138127331 91% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.9 23.380412469 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2150920934 59.4972553346 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.4 141.124799967 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9 23.380412469 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.35 0.674092028746 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 48.3939759036 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.84677419355 1.64882698954 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.513124851132 0.391690518653 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140336007481 0.123202303941 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0665235731708 0.077325440228 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.620586078444 0.547984918172 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118053568167 0.149214159877 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.241183526615 0.161403998019 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855990908792 0.0892212321368 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.51445488046 0.385218514788 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.023778491708 0.0692045440612 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.386689025885 0.275328986314 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488261618436 0.0653680567796 75% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.