"The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. "
The stated issue at hand is that the desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large. While corporations do have every right dictate how much and how often to increase their targets profits by, stronger consideration needs to be given by each corporation as to their impact on to the welfare of the nation and local communities as a whole. Their continued emphasis on increasing annual profits and exceeding last years profit ranges places a heavy toll on the nation. When corporation push for increased profits one of the first areas that take a hit is jobs. A second result in attempting to increase products is money leaving the community due to the fact corporations found other resources at lower cost and the final reason is that the loss of jobs and the flow of money exiting a community adds to downfall of economic areas with a nation.
First, When corporations push to increase their profits, jobs are the first area of cost most manager look to deliver results for the company. While the lower costs do reflect higher revenue margins, the impact on the local community is not ideal. Many families are left without a mean of income and forced to relocate in order to provide for their families. Corporation in many cases employee a large portion in a specific area and with the loss of jobs it creates economic instability within that area.
Second, with the departure of positions in corporations, many families do not have the mean to buy items in the area. This translate to less money circulating in the local economy and will eventually reflect on the health of that local economy forcing many to relocate to other areas that are able to better support their families.
Third, even though corporations enjoy the benefits of increased profits when they incorporate their decisions to pursue lower costs to maximize profits, there is a much longer lingering effect of those decisions. If you take a look at domestic cities within the US, like Detroit, the evidence is right there that pursuit of maximized profits will lead to the inevitable down fall of cities all together. All the cities in a geographic area are interconnected and when corporations make adjustments, like maximizing profits at the expense of the population, results like Detriot, a once great economic area, exist.
In conclusion, when corporations desire to maximize profits is does create great conflict on the general welfare of the nation at large. While initially it may seem harmless in removing a few job here and there, in the long run the consequences awaiting those decisions is much more severe. The loss of job, the lessening of money circulating in an economy and the decline of cities with economic power all leads to the downfall of a nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cases'' or 'case's'?
Suggestion: cases'; case's
...for their families. Corporation in many cases employee a large portion in a specific ...
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Line 9, column 189, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'few jobs'.
Suggestion: few jobs
...ally it may seem harmless in removing a few job here and there, in the long run the con...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'while', 'as to', 'in conclusion', 'in many cases']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.276470588235 0.240241500013 115% => OK
Verbs: 0.147058823529 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0941176470588 0.0880659088768 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0313725490196 0.0497285424764 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.021568627451 0.0444667217837 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141176470588 0.12292977631 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0333333333333 0.0406280797675 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68317696005 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.043137254902 0.030933414821 139% => OK
Particles: 0.00196078431373 0.0016655270985 118% => OK
Determiners: 0.125490196078 0.0997080785238 126% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00588235294118 0.0249443105267 24% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0176470588235 0.0148568991511 119% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2811.0 2732.02544248 103% => OK
No of words: 476.0 452.878318584 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90546218487 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.346638655462 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264705882353 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176470588235 0.200843997647 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102941176471 0.132149295362 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68317696005 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 219.290929204 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457983193277 0.48968727796 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.6976798237 55.4138127331 93% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.380412469 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8057090339 59.4972553346 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.352941176 141.124799967 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 23.380412469 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.674092028746 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 54.4705882353 51.4728631049 106% => OK
Elegance: 2.25490196078 1.64882698954 137% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.578528052157 0.391690518653 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131389666148 0.123202303941 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0698186381099 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.610694845649 0.547984918172 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129820791068 0.149214159877 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.28220877109 0.161403998019 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167899064629 0.0892212321368 188% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.486299318968 0.385218514788 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0886296703028 0.0692045440612 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.420628015573 0.275328986314 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105767675047 0.0653680567796 162% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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