Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed

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Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.

Education, as defined by John Dewey, is the process of facilitating learning and acquiring knowledge, skills, ideas, values and habits. The fundamental objective of any educational institute is to facilitate this very process of learning and knowledge acquisition irrespective of the materialistic considerations and consequences. The proposition that these institutes should actively encourage their students to pursue fields of study based on lucrative career prospects, instead of interest and aptitude, undermines this very objective of these varsities.

First of all, what are the criteria for evaluating the lucrativeness of any field and its future prospects? The demand for jobs in any particular area varies with time. Any discipline which seems lucrative now may not be the same say after a certain period. For example, with the invention of integrated circuits, there was a job boom for this electronic graduate in second-half of the twentieth century which now has died down. The early 2000s was said to be the year of information technology which now has been taken over by areas such as, AI, data science, machine learning, etc. Any such step by the institutes might prove to be futile given the obsolescent nature of market requirements.

Moreover, every student is a unique combination of traits, qualities and aptitude. It is this intrinsic natural talent that can be decisive in his success in any endeavor which ultimately fetches him/her a lucrative job. A person with a perspicacious mind can be a good lawyer; curiosity is the key to be a scientist; aesthetic abilities are crucial for an artist; physical prowess is elemental for an athlete and so on. This is further corroborated by the Gardener’s theory of multiple intelligences that classifies skill-sets of children into different categories such as word-smart, Maths-smart, sound-smart, etc. A student who has cultivated interest in an area from beginning and has the latent potential for the same can never be a match for someone who is pursuing that field to just get a fat salary. Completely using future job security, instead of intrinsic talent and interest, as the basis will cause a mismatch between students’ abilities and job requirements leading to a stream of unskilled, unenthusiastic laymen with bleak future irrespective of the demand of their profession.

Proponents of the argument may argue that not every student is fortunate enough to have interest and passion for areas that can give him/her a secure future. Furthermore, increasing student loans and financial family background impedes many students to freely select careers they like and forces them to study just to get a decent salaried job. While the students must have the freedom to choose between passion and pragmatism, and for occupational education it is justifiable for them to consider career prospects, the educational institutes, however, must refrain to influence his/her decision either by encouragement or discouragement by instilling ideas without their notice, as this is beyond their role and entrusted objectives.

In conclusion, the role of educational institutes is to strive to make skilled and educated professionals able to make significant contributions in their professional ventures. Encouraging or dissuading students from pursuing any academic offering would not only be a deviation from this responsibility but also a violation of their fundamentals. However, they must set up career and placement cells to help and guide students to decide about their field of study and secure a dependable employment.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 617, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd-smart, Maths-smart, sound-smart, etc. A student who has cultivated interest in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, still, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3043.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 559.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44364937388 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86242540663 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17010684588 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 306.0 215.323595506 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54740608229 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 965.7 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7058997753 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.904761905 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.619047619 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237648359239 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642143960809 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568439861819 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139117701586 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077951844117 0.0667264976115 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.8420337079 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.38706741573 118% => OK
difficult_words: 176.0 100.480337079 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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