EVERY INDIVIDUAL IN A SOCIETY HAS A RESPONSIBILITY TO OBEY JUST LAWS AND TO DISOBEY AND RESIST UNJUST LAWS.
From the dawn of civilization, one term has always been highly debateable and and seems so elusive that holding
a grasp seems virtually impossible is "just". After all how can one define such word which is highly subjective:
different person are driven by different sets of morals, tradition and code of ethics: the thing which seem just in
one backyard may seem utterly drivel in others. For simply the fact, that there has not been any sorts of solid benchmark
to determine the just , I cannot agree with the statement that all humanity has to obey just laws , which any case seems
far too extreme for simply justification.
The laws are made by humans which means the justness and implication is highly malleable and not free from biaseness.
The term is very powerful that while used with evil intentions and with trickery and cunningness is a very much
persuasive. We can see many examples where the powerful and dominant countries and personals have simply justified their wrongdoings to be just and for the good of the country and future welfare. When Galileo - a famous scientist - who presented and demonstrated his ideas and philosophy that its the Earth that rotates around the sun and infact sun is the focal point of solar system was incarcerated in his own house for the rest of his life: though he was correct , he was against
the law of that time which seemed just for the others.
Similarly, in the case of Hitler and The Nazi Germany who convinced that war was the only solution and hoverd the nation and the world towards a catastrophic world war was simply not just but rather appeared so at that time and era and to the
people. so, it is not easy to define the justness as it is highly related to personal conception, ideology and as said earlier
the morals, ethics ,and the traditions and beliefs.
However, there are some laws which must be followed in any case simply to avoid the devastation and mayhem or chaos.
As such in the case of traffic lights. Irrespective of what you or I have an opinion about it, we must follow -not for
the world or betterness- merely for our own safety. Other issues like human right , child right , anti-racism all are
the just laws or ethics one must follow .
In conclusion, it is highly personal and subjective to define just and unjust laws either we should follow or restrict it.
Due to the lack of hallmark for what's just, it is always seen that the wrong kind of people mislead and persuade in the name of justness. It is, in no possible ways, must to follow the just laws but having said that there are some laws like traffic rules and human and child and racism issues which must certainly be followed.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'similarly', 'so', 'while', 'after all', 'as to', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'in any case']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218809980806 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.138195777351 0.157235817809 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0767754318618 0.0880659088768 87% => OK
Adverbs: 0.084452975048 0.0497285424764 170% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0403071017274 0.0444667217837 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1113243762 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0249520153551 0.0406280797675 61% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.50290115924 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0191938579655 0.030933414821 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0959692898273 0.0997080785238 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0191938579655 0.0249443105267 77% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0268714011516 0.0148568991511 181% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2707.0 2732.02544248 99% => OK
No of words: 482.0 452.878318584 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61618257261 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.284232365145 0.366273622748 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.184647302905 0.280924506359 66% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132780082988 0.200843997647 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0871369294606 0.132149295362 66% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50290115924 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 219.290929204 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497925311203 0.48968727796 102% => OK
Word variations: 57.7689167554 55.4138127331 104% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 30.125 23.380412469 129% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7466595943 59.4972553346 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.1875 141.124799967 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.125 23.380412469 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.674092028746 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.94800884956 384% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 21.0 5.21349557522 403% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.5897302905 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.3503649635 1.64882698954 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282813011789 0.391690518653 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126264704317 0.123202303941 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0597100295836 0.077325440228 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.775003332666 0.547984918172 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.265890054445 0.149214159877 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143201668055 0.161403998019 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821992337751 0.0892212321368 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.144604067011 0.385218514788 38% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0927737827874 0.0692045440612 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12404600466 0.275328986314 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089590269544 0.0653680567796 137% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.30420353982 170% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 9.0 3.66592920354 246% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.