Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position
The statement that every individual should obey just law while resisting unjust law is highly debatable. As a matter of fact, The Law is the rule and order that has been framed by the government for the welfare of its own people. Therefore, Stating that one should disobey the law that seems to be unjust is like creating a space for unwelcoming activities that will disturb the peace and decorum within a country. Hence, I firmly support the idea that all the citizens of a country should follow the law irrespective of the nature of its just.
For example, let us think of a kid under eighteen years wishes to drive a car. As a contradiction the law strictly forbids the kid from doing so, irrespective of the country where he belongs. If the same kid impetuously drives the car thinking that he can disobey the law because the law is denying his will and hence unjust to him,it'll bring egregious events to hims as well as to the society. Therefore, taking all promulgate circumstances under consideration every citizen should abide by the law although it is not always corroborative to individuals.
A recently encountered heartbreaking incident in India, where a juvenile harassed and killed a women and was arrested within a few days. Yet he was vindicated due to lack of witness and similar vague reasons, flashed in all the channels worldwide. We all can make one conclusion pertaining to this incident that when a society is creating a space to ameliorate the laws for our own benefit there will definitely be someone being affected by it. Hence abiding by the laws without any prejudice is the real responsibility of a citizen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the nature of its just. For example, let us think of a kid under eighteen yea...
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... he can disobey the law because the law is denying his will and hence unjust to him,itll b...
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...denying his will and hence unjust to him,itll bring egregious events to hims as well ...
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... in India, where a juvenile harassed and killed a women and was arrested within a...
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...where a juvenile harassed and killed a women and was arrested within a few days. Yet...
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...nitely be someone being affected by it. Hence abiding by the laws without any prejudi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['hence', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'as a matter of fact', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23606557377 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.167213114754 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0426229508197 0.0880659088768 48% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.055737704918 0.0497285424764 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0426229508197 0.0444667217837 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12131147541 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0622950819672 0.0406280797675 153% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84646905753 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0295081967213 0.030933414821 95% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.144262295082 0.0997080785238 145% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0295081967213 0.0249443105267 118% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0229508196721 0.0148568991511 154% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1642.0 2732.02544248 60% => OK
No of words: 283.0 452.878318584 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80212014134 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.58838876751 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339222614841 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257950530035 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.180212014134 0.200843997647 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102473498233 0.132149295362 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84646905753 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 219.290929204 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572438162544 0.48968727796 117% => OK
Word variations: 59.9103129354 55.4138127331 108% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 23.5833333333 23.380412469 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6389083547 59.4972553346 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.833333333 141.124799967 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 23.380412469 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.674092028746 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.94800884956 61% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 49.3783863369 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.58024691358 1.64882698954 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292131570601 0.391690518653 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.123051460264 0.123202303941 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0693698674964 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.563911347738 0.547984918172 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.144099877387 0.149214159877 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130454772114 0.161403998019 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477996275181 0.0892212321368 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.431911533607 0.385218514788 112% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.109417988659 0.0692045440612 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226874186266 0.275328986314 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380500152369 0.0653680567796 58% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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