Government should provide education free of cost to the students who go to the colleges but can not afford the college
The third eye of every individuals; education is one of the elemental need and right of every personality. However, the higher cost create an obstacle in gaining it. And one of the easiest and effective way to tackle this problem is to make education free of cost by government in the college. It does not imply that the education should be made totally free. Instead of this the student should have to provide a service to the country for certain period after the completion of their study. This system is not the system of taking loan from the country and paying back to the nation after the completion of the study , it is only the way of serving the nation for providing their great support.
Because of lack of economy many assiduous students are unable to study and our own country has to face from the problem of losing the gems of the country. When I am in grade 5 there was a very industrious personality nearby our house. He always study hard to get admission in the medical and he proved himself by topping in the entrance examination. The college had provided him the scholarship of 50 % but he can not afford the remaining 50% of the college. Due to unaffordability he should have to leave that sheet and instead of him there was the student from the higher class who can afford that charge and now he became a doctor. And the industrious student become a shopkeeper of small shop. It shows that if the college fee is made free the hard working student be able to study and he might create history or some revolution in the field of medical and our country will able to produce a quality product
With the increase in the literary rate there is increase in the living standard of the people. In 1950 there is increase in the living standard of the people of America this is the result of the policy made that make education free to the hard working students from loggerhead. This can reduce the disparity among the people of the society a\can able to make equality among the different classes of the people. Education to the indigent people can be effective to increase their economic classes and as a whole the economy of the nation can be increased.
Making education free of cost without any return to the government create increase in taxes to be paid by the certain level of the people because nothing can be get free of cost in modern age. To solve the problem of higher taxes to certain group the system of paying back to the nation as the reward of providing fund during college is a necessity. And every students should paid him debt as a service to the country so that the problem of higher tax can be solved as well. So , government should provide education free of cost who can not afford that and the student should also pay the government in return as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry personality. However, the higher cost create an obstacle in gaining it. And on...
^^
Line 1, column 619, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nation after the completion of the study , it is only the way of serving the natio...
^^
Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...blem of losing the gems of the country. When I am in grade 5 there was a very indust...
^^^^
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... personality nearby our house. He always study hard to get admission in the medic...
^^
Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'studies'.
Suggestion: studies
...ersonality nearby our house. He always study hard to get admission in the medical an...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the remaining 50% of the college. Due to unaffordability he should have to leave ...
^^
Line 3, column 685, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... industrious student become a shopkeeper of small shop. It shows that if the coll...
^^
Line 3, column 734, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l shop. It shows that if the college fee is made free the hard working student ...
^^
Line 3, column 738, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...op. It shows that if the college fee is made free the hard working student be a...
^^
Line 3, column 749, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s that if the college fee is made free the hard working student be able to stud...
^^
Line 7, column 478, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... of higher tax can be solved as well. So , government should provide education fre...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'third', 'well', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236842105263 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.137218045113 0.157235817809 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0864661654135 0.0880659088768 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0394736842105 0.0497285424764 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0394736842105 0.0444667217837 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137218045113 0.12292977631 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0338345864662 0.0406280797675 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42314005397 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0413533834586 0.030933414821 134% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.152255639098 0.0997080785238 153% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0300751879699 0.0249443105267 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00563909774436 0.0148568991511 38% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2799.0 2732.02544248 102% => OK
No of words: 509.0 452.878318584 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49901768173 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32416502947 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.218074656189 0.280924506359 78% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.11394891945 0.200843997647 57% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0707269155206 0.132149295362 54% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42314005397 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 219.290929204 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.39489194499 0.48968727796 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.8496988355 55.4138127331 81% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.45 23.380412469 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3027922531 59.4972553346 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.95 141.124799967 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.45 23.380412469 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.674092028746 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.2574656189 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.88695652174 1.64882698954 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.635522455444 0.391690518653 162% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.201147497833 0.123202303941 163% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.127970255747 0.077325440228 165% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.623267832504 0.547984918172 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170054270907 0.149214159877 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.310080888999 0.161403998019 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119686770201 0.0892212321368 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.6182953675 0.385218514788 161% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0247624237577 0.0692045440612 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.516099455843 0.275328986314 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573663720513 0.0653680567796 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 7.22455752212 138% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.5995575221 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.