Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Yes, I agree with the author the government should invest as much in the art as they do in the military.
Art has a unique identity and purpose in the world. It is globally accepted that Art and Literature from the past has defined and shaped a country's culture, tradition and History. Without this trace, it is not possible to maintain the morale of the people of any country. This lack of moral integrity will lead to conflict within the country. Preserving our culture and tradition by means of art should be given equal preference as military.
If we look into the History, many great leader like Subramania Bharthiyar to Martin Luther king used art like pervasive poem and writing as a powerful to ignite the sense of patriotism and unity among the people. They understood the power of an art to kindle the spark in the system. These method they followed found to effective. Hence, it is important for a government to understand the power and effectiveness of the art consider it on the same level with military.
Furthermore an art has the power to connect to people emotionally and bind to them integrally, For example a photo of a boy with blood in head from Syria became the world wide sensation. People from all over the world irrespective of their country, class have supported to find a solution through peace and impede war. It can also told the pervasive and powerful art can lethal as a nuclear war heads. Since it binds with them integrally. So a government should give importance to this emotional warheads.
Sometime people may argue that Military is a country's basic form of defense. So military should be given high preference compared to arts. But however art of also same job of preserving our culture, history and tradition. So it is important Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 322.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73602484472 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65686270044 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534161490683 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6766778103 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2631578947 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9473684211 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18472698561 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658641410061 0.0831039109588 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903492286591 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140185497777 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10244228885 0.0667264976115 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.1639044944 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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