After the merge of computers, some people might feel threatened by the abilities of computers, such as calculate faster than human beings. Many of the functions even can replace human labor, therefore some people are afraid that machines might progress and eventually defeat humans one day with technologies continuous advancing. However, in my stance, machines would never smarter than or surpass humans for the following reasons.
Admittedly, there are many things which machines could do faster and easier than humans, like finishing calculation in a split-second, translating any language, and lifting heavy things. Nevertheless, these things could be performed by humans, too. To illustrate, that is engineers who comprehend the mechanisms of physics and then they use metals to assemble a system which could achieve the same movements. These machines are invented to help humans, which cannot surpass human abilities.
Furthermore, programs installed in machines which control their abilities are written by engineers who belong to human beings. Therefore, there is illogical that machines can be superior than humans since they are created by humans and humans control their behaviors and their programs. For instance, without engineers put the calculation formula in computers at first, computers cannot do any counting. If there is no people who write software or firmware in machines, machines are no different from metals, plastic, or woods.
Finally, some people might concern about the artificial intelligence because they are claimed that they could do self-learning. Nonetheless, their self-learning function means that they mimic human behaviors, but not means that they have brains and can think like humans. Since they are imitate humans, they cannot do better than humans. For example, in the famous Go competition which use artificial intelligence to compete with humans, the person won the final round. It is because the person changed his steps in the final round and the AI only learns and predict by the person's past.
To sum up, the plot of humans being conquered by computers would solely show up in movies but not real life. Humans have many native advantages which machines do not have. Additionally, machines are created by humans, not themselves.
Essay evaluation report
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arguments: OK
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 355 350
No. of Characters: 1871 1500
No. of Different Words: 182 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.341 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.27 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.622 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 147 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 101 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 74 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.684 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.088 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.684 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.348 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.561 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.103 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
After the merge of computers, some people might feel th...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...illogical that machines can be superior than humans since they are created by humans...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'nonetheless', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'for example', 'for instance', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.238916256158 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.165024630542 0.157235817809 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0738916256158 0.0880659088768 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0541871921182 0.0497285424764 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0394088669951 0.0444667217837 89% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118226600985 0.12292977631 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0320197044335 0.0406280797675 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.74728915458 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0147783251232 0.030933414821 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00492610837438 0.0016655270985 296% => OK
Determiners: 0.0689655172414 0.0997080785238 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0369458128079 0.0249443105267 148% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0221674876847 0.0148568991511 149% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2286.0 2732.02544248 84% => OK
No of words: 355.0 452.878318584 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.43943661972 6.0361032391 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.425352112676 0.366273622748 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.321126760563 0.280924506359 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.219718309859 0.200843997647 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.157746478873 0.132149295362 119% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74728915458 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 219.290929204 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532394366197 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 57.5869403421 55.4138127331 104% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.6842105263 23.380412469 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8874361071 59.4972553346 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.315789474 141.124799967 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 23.380412469 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.842105263158 0.674092028746 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 50.7968865827 51.4728631049 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.50476190476 1.64882698954 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357162356402 0.391690518653 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.133842180707 0.123202303941 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0987145078007 0.077325440228 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.512464528654 0.547984918172 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0908270511746 0.149214159877 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132678465833 0.161403998019 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780953290343 0.0892212321368 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.255486783626 0.385218514788 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0509572653701 0.0692045440612 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230722117747 0.275328986314 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425859609078 0.0653680567796 65% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.5995575221 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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