The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
What do we mean by rapid pace of life? It simply means the advancement made in today's world because of which everybody has become so busy. Tough these advancements may have some disadvantages but its merit will always outweigh its demerit.Therefore, the statement is not true and the rapid pace of life has helped humans in many ways.
Every single person whom we come across in our dday to day life is busy doing something or the other. Be it a student struggling hard to cope up with studies or a lawyer busy defending his client. As people become more engaged in their respective work, the ted to come across various problems. As a result, their problem solving capacity increases. Consider a example of student. A student has to do homework, study for exams, maintain social life, take care of his health, etc. Even if is failing in one of the above mentioned task, say exams, its effect should not be reflected on other tasks. Realizing this he may cope up with studies and study well. This was not the case in old ages. Students were only focussed on either studying( if he/she is pundits child) or only on dissolution( if its the case of kings children). Hence, the celerity of today's world have led children to multitask better.
Moreover, advancement in technology, also result of rapid development, has led to many benevolent factors. These advancements helps to deal with mundane day-to-day jobs and focus more on important things. To elucidate, the invent of calculator, has saved many hectic and time consuming calculations. We can do math in seconds and establish result much faster. Also, taking the example of automobile. Travelling to place to place has become more easy and convinient. The time previously consumed by horse carts to travel from one city to another for whatever purpose has reduced drastically because of automobiles. Hence, may problems may it be time consumption or boring calculations are permanently overcame by technology.
However, in the race of day-to-day life, these inventions can be cause to many deleterious effects as well. To exemplify, in order to get to meeting on time, a person may over-speed his vehicle an meet an accident. Or considering the example of cyber terrorism. With the invent of e-finance also comes the risk of getting your account hacked or robbed. Thus, we cannot completely overlook the negative points of technology.
Overall, we can conclude that many problems are solved with the help of readily available solutions. Not to mention these solutions comes with its risk. But as stated before, people fear what they do not understand and hence, if we learn properly to use the above mentioned solutions, it is no doubt a boon in today's world.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Therefore
... merit will always outweigh its demerit.Therefore, the statement is not true and the rapi...
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...more on important things. To elucidate, the invent of calculator, has saved many hectic an...
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...g the example of automobile. Travelling to place to place has become more easy and convinient. Th...
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...me, a person may over-speed his vehicle an meet an accident. Or considering the ex...
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...e of cyber terrorism. With the invent of e-finance also comes the risk of getting...
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Suggestion: solutions'; solution's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2258.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93013100437 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77534880209 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 215.323595506 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56768558952 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6074978325 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2666666667 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115088714402 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283731153878 0.0831039109588 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026332991049 0.0758088955206 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0662433491273 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029770113199 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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