ISSUE:
The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Encouraging cooperation over competition is the best practice to prepare the young people for leadership in any fields.
Cooperation among the young minds will ultimately leads to team work, which is single most important virtue of any successful companies to events in this world. From freedom fight to winning a game of football, nothing can’t be accomplished without team work. For a winning a game of football, we need 11 players to be in synchronization. Given the accomplishment and success of the teamwork, it is necessary to instill Cooperation among the young minds.
Cooperation will lead to solve the issue using "Divide and conquer” method. The issue can be easily shared among the many team members and resolved. The team members easily contribute to the solution by giving his maximal effort towards his part of the solution. Hence, prompting team work over competition ultimately increase the efficiency of the solution. So it rudimentary to support cooperation over competition as an important value for a leader.
Since, the young people tends to be inexperienced in their domains, working together with others like minded people and sharing their ideas/values will aids providing a complete solution to a problem. Given to account to balance their inexperience and thoughts, it is essential leaders should consider cooperation over competition.
One may argue that, without competition people may become more lethargic and tend to think, that they are master of this world. But, competition often leads to enmity between to competitors and obviously leads to other wrong deeds. Hence encouraging cooperation over competition is the ultimate way to prepare a young people for leadership.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...n among the young minds will ultimately leads to team work, which is single most impo...
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Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'aid'
Suggestion: aid
...ple and sharing their ideas/values will aids providing a complete solution to a prob...
^^^^
Line 5, column 232, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...d obviously leads to other wrong deeds. Hence encouraging cooperation over competitio...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 268.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44029850746 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08007414862 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555970149254 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 704.065955056 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5590451905 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.2 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.73333333333 5.21951772744 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134454430287 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505949619341 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638451714517 0.0758088955206 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940915165106 0.150359130593 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595073241679 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.