Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Leaders are always expected to fulfil demands that the people have, however, this is not the only quality that defines a leader. Leaders have several responsibilities to take into account when they take charge of their position. There may arise situations where they are unable to fulfil some demands, this does not come in way of creation of a leader. However, if the person in position is resorting to self concentrated demands then he may not be called a leader.
There are several qualities that define a leader, whether the adhere to what they promise, whether they are fulfilling needs of the common people, whether they are working on issues for the betterment of the society. If a person qualifies for these qualities then he can called a leader. The overall development of a leader is charaterized by these qualities.
In a democracy, it is the people who choose their leader and they are right to have certain expectations from the leader. It might not be possible for the person to fulfil every demand that is placed on him. He may take up a course of action that delays the expected result or might even backfire. Like in the case of current Indian Prime Minister, Narendra Modi. When Narendra Modi was elected Prime Minister of India, people were expecting quick changes in the system. Modi has been a true leader but according to certain critics he is not fulfilling the demands. The people who criticize need to understand the amounting pressure on the leader. Modi has introduced interesting schemes like Swach Bharat Abhyaan and Make in India, these are promising ventures that will take time to flourish. Demands cannot always be fulfilled in a short course of time, it is important to analyse whether the leader is taking a proper course of action and moving towards the right direction. Modi is working on some major issues in India, it might happen that he may miss out on some demands. However, it cannot remove the tag "Leader of India" from his name.
If the leader turns out to be selfish and lethargic, one who does not care of the demands and finds pleasure in the power that he is bestowed with then that person cannot be called a leader. That is the case of a dictator, where one is just focussed on showing off his power by imposing harsh rules. A person in power who is not fulfilling demands or working towards the society cannot qualify as a leader.
Therefore, according to me, leader are not created just by the demands impended upon them. There are several other aspects, in addition to fulfilling demands, to look at while creation of a leader. All these qualities combined create a leader.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2265625 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.18359375 0.157235817809 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.056640625 0.0880659088768 64% => OK
Adverbs: 0.048828125 0.0497285424764 98% => OK
Pronouns: 0.046875 0.0444667217837 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119140625 0.12292977631 97% => OK
Participles: 0.052734375 0.0406280797675 130% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54291740707 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.029296875 0.030933414821 95% => OK
Particles: 0.0078125 0.0016655270985 469% => OK
Determiners: 0.109375 0.0997080785238 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025390625 0.0249443105267 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.025390625 0.0148568991511 171% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2648.0 2732.02544248 97% => OK
No of words: 458.0 452.878318584 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78165938865 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.379912663755 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.257641921397 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.146288209607 0.200843997647 73% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0851528384279 0.132149295362 64% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54291740707 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 219.290929204 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443231441048 0.48968727796 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.134999347 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6194690265 116% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0833333333 23.380412469 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8319168158 59.4972553346 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 141.124799967 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 23.380412469 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.416666666667 0.674092028746 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 44.8475254731 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.42657342657 1.64882698954 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318911306136 0.391690518653 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.107783311235 0.123202303941 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0704315005989 0.077325440228 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.504326395086 0.547984918172 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142202289898 0.149214159877 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112135473638 0.161403998019 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863366620078 0.0892212321368 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.359988317354 0.385218514788 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0974193974321 0.0692045440612 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215491092592 0.275328986314 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281570661385 0.0653680567796 43% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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