A nation should require all of its student to study the same national curriculum until they enter college
Each and every student of a country must study the same national syllabus till they enter college. This thought is remarkably insightful and the merits of this idea is more likely to surpass the demerits. The reasons for which I standby the above issue is numerous and I mainly adore the unbiased neutral system that promotes equity among young minds.
The primary reason that made me support this idea was that, if this system is implemented it would make the students learn and appreciate the cultural heritage, traditions and moral ethics of their country as a whole rather than focussing only on the specific features of a particular sub-region. This would enhance the national integrity among the students.
Secondarily, if such a system is launched into existence then it will lead to unbiased neutral environment in which all the classes of people will be given the same standard of education. This in a way would attempt to minimize the difference between the rich and the poor, contributing towards the betterment of the nation.
In the year of 2012, the state of Tamil Nadu in India introduced this system and it was observed that students were able to appreciate the cultural differences of different regions and it also helped the poor class people to rise and provide significant contributions to the society in a variety of fields. Finally, the system will also require the students to acquire basic skill knowledge that would bolster them to acquire job and thereby indirectly contributing to the increase in the employment oppurtunity of the country.
However, if such a system is implemented, care must be taken to maintain the quality of the universal education that is provided. Since an entire nation's future is dependant on this curriculum, heavy emphasis must be made to frequently update the curriculum so that it is competent enough to survive in this competitive world.
A nation that follows a universal curriculum is certainly a thought to be welcomed, as it has far more benefits than demerits and if it is ensured to maintain the standards and quality of the curriculum then any country implementing such a system is sure to prosper.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 165, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...ided. Since an entire nations future is dependant on this curriculum, heavy emphasis must...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03324099723 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78888907215 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529085872576 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8221249959 60.3974514979 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.416666667 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0833333333 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184035566821 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737197188922 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872053514112 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937282123943 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375505472589 0.0667264976115 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 48.8420337079 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.1743820225 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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