A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill is considered as education. Educations are considered physical right of every person. Children are considered as the future of every country. Proper educations not only helps them to be self independent and successful in future, they are the on to carry the responsibility of nation. Therefore it is very important to form a strong base in their formative year, so that they are not only become successful but also turn good citizens.
I almost agree with the statements a nations should require all of students to study the same national curriculum until they enter the college. However, the pattern of course can be change on some aspect on the need of students or society.
A common curriculum ensures a stables and universal learning pattern. Having a uniform curriculum is beneficial in many ways. It helps to provide the uniform course of the study throughout the country. No one will be discriminated in the case of educations. It assists every student to maintain the same level of education before entering into the further academic step. Common curriculum is beneficial for those students who study more then on school during their educations. For example, peoples with governments or transferable job, they have to go in different state for their work. In that case before transferring to another state their children study in one school. Then after they have to study in different one. So in this case this common curriculum will helps them to perpetuate their study from same level that they were studying in the previous school. If there are no guidelines for common curriculum, this children will have to face a new problems of unfamiliar topic .so it is very important to made a guidelines for common curriculum throughout the country.
This era is considered as the era of competition. Every child’s have to competes with one another to explore themselves better than other. If the guidelines are notsame throughout the nations, it will have serious effect on the students. Common curriculum is required for the fair competition. for examples students have to take a entrance exam for entering in the college, if there is a variation in the curriculum that they have studied ,the entrance test will not be made on similar lines for everyone .Hence, it would benefit some students who studied that curriculum and the other students would be at loss. There is no way to judge their capabilities in the same parameter. Hence, it is very important that uniformity be maintained in the curriculum school level, and students will be able to face the competition when they leave the school.
In some countries like Nepal, governments have made a common guidelines for all students. However, private school are teaching in their own way. This pattern of teaching have a detrimental effect on the students who follow the guidelines provides by governments. They were unable to compete with the private students during entering in to the college, so they can’t get chance to explore themselves. So government of Nepal must have to collaborate with the private school to making common gudielins, so that all of the students will have a standard level of education. It will also helps to face them in free competition.
However, some of school can make little-bit change in guidelines based on the circumstances, but they can’t make fully different pattern of guidelines. As we know that all of students are not of same category, some of them extra talented, some are poor, so we can make some change in the curriculum provided by nations. And we also can change the curriculum based on society in some aspects.
At a nut shell, A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. so that it will helps in ensuring the free competitions as well as provides equality in the educations for all of the children of nations. It also provides equal chance of getting selected in the further academic step. However, little bit change in the guidelines can be made based on the situations or circumstances.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'of course', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.220338983051 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.161668839635 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0886571056063 0.0880659088768 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0312907431551 0.0497285424764 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0534550195567 0.0444667217837 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.152542372881 0.12292977631 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0417209908735 0.0406280797675 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84647753586 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0312907431551 0.030933414821 101% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.116036505867 0.0997080785238 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0273794002608 0.0249443105267 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00521512385919 0.0148568991511 35% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 4182.0 2732.02544248 153% => OK
No of words: 693.0 452.878318584 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03463203463 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.13077900149 4.58838876751 112% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.354978354978 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284271284271 0.280924506359 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.227994227994 0.200843997647 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137085137085 0.132149295362 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84647753586 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 257.0 219.290929204 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.370851370851 0.48968727796 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.3256944706 55.4138127331 84% => OK
How many sentences: 38.0 20.6194690265 184% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 18.2368421053 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7859781025 59.4972553346 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.052631579 141.124799967 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2368421053 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.315789473684 0.674092028746 47% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.21349557522 537% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.6639705324 51.4728631049 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.68253968254 1.64882698954 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425587431586 0.391690518653 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.123145374855 0.123202303941 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0928436016562 0.077325440228 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487233345592 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160128788021 0.149214159877 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143771647357 0.161403998019 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159345519809 0.0892212321368 179% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.394627030715 0.385218514788 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.111183761366 0.0692045440612 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292796843668 0.275328986314 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133063055358 0.0653680567796 204% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.4325221239 163% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.88274336283 348% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 17.0 7.22455752212 235% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 13.0 2.70907079646 480% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 33.0 13.5995575221 243% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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