No field can advance significantly unless outsiders brings their knowledge and experience to their field

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No field can advance significantly unless outsiders brings their knowledge and experience to their field

I agree with the statement that no field can advance without the knowledge from outsiders. As all the sciences are interrelate with each other. The knowledge from one area is helpful for the operation of the other area.
Consider how entomology requires the knowledge of soil science, plant breeding, and agronomy to completely eradicate the insect problem, we need to have the knowledge of many science with which insects are related. Like soil science provides the knowledge of the soil type, favorable moisture for the insect growth, different practices lke flooding and drying employed in soil. Plant breeding assists entomology by producing disease resistance variety by examining the restintance power of the insect. Similarly, agronomy deals with the different types of variety of plant.
Consider how entomologists require the knowledge of many sciences like chemistry, plant breeding, and soil science to completely eradicate the insect problem. Plant breeding assists in the development of insect resistance strains which plays pivotal role to deal with the insect problems. Likewise, Chemist formulates insecticides to kill the insect on a single dose or on repeated dose. Similarly, Soil science assists to control insects by the adoption of different treatments like soil drying, flooding.
And the more striking example of the field in which the knowledge of diverse field is required in evolution of human being. To fully decipher in this field, one need to have the knowledge of geology, biochemistry, linguists.

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Average: 1.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e without the knowledge from outsiders. As all the sciences are interrelate with e...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'interrelated'.
Suggestion: interrelated
...from outsiders. As all the sciences are interrelate with each other. The knowledge from one...
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Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...completely eradicate the insect problem, we need to have the knowledge of many sc...
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Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun science seems to be countable; consider using: 'many sciences'.
Suggestion: many sciences
...blem, we need to have the knowledge of many science with which insects are related. Like so...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'likewise', 'similarly', 'so']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.325757575758 0.240241500013 136% => OK
Verbs: 0.132575757576 0.157235817809 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0681818181818 0.0880659088768 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0227272727273 0.0497285424764 46% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.00757575757576 0.0444667217837 17% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.147727272727 0.12292977631 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0454545454545 0.0406280797675 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.79266887548 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.030303030303 0.030933414821 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.109848484848 0.0997080785238 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00378787878788 0.0249443105267 15% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0189393939394 0.0148568991511 127% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1532.0 2732.02544248 56% => OK
No of words: 237.0 452.878318584 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.4641350211 6.0361032391 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.58838876751 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.438818565401 0.366273622748 120% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.388185654008 0.280924506359 138% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.282700421941 0.200843997647 141% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.185654008439 0.132149295362 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79266887548 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 219.290929204 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527426160338 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 49.420394943 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6194690265 63% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2307692308 23.380412469 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9860500925 59.4972553346 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.846153846 141.124799967 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 23.380412469 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.307692307692 0.674092028746 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 57.0493346316 51.4728631049 111% => OK
Elegance: 3.18604651163 1.64882698954 193% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12058998525 0.391690518653 31% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.130943918928 0.123202303941 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.06969515159 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.643067889605 0.547984918172 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.108952559644 0.149214159877 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0662809390469 0.161403998019 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737972510082 0.0892212321368 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.451519262645 0.385218514788 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.148289327327 0.0692045440612 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102539783448 0.275328986314 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475312078004 0.0653680567796 73% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.

Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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