In order for any work of art—for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
These days artistic work have a huge affect on how people perceive or understand a particular theme. It can be seen that many people are attracted to film , novel , poem or even song. However, if artistic work is not made meaningful and comprehensible to the spectator then the true intention of the art may not be conveyed and its true value be unrecognised.
Today stories of great men of the past and secrets of the past are best presented in the form of an art for example film or a novel or a song. These artistic forms can have a huge impact on people who view them and in turn they seem to learn much from it. However, it is essential that these artistic forms are not made unfathomable to the public. Especially for a person who has not reached the level of a scholar, reading the poems of Juliet and ceaser may have no meaning at all. The poetic language only gets his understanding flummoxed. The prime content of the art must be cogently displayed. This art can be a very useful source of teaching. Also, they can inspire the greatest of talent among the people by just creating a drawing that has a huge impact on the person. For this is needs to elementarily be understood by the public.
Although it is essential to make the art understandable, often times it would be unjust to display the art in that manner. Several great paintings made by greatest of the artists had not been recognized at their times. It is only now that their work is being comprehended and truly valued. The people at that time did not have the level of understanding as the artist himself and hence fail to recognize the importance of the art.
Henceforth to make success of the art it is necessary that the art be created in a manner fathomable to the public. That way the art can get true recognition and the importance it needs without it being rebuked or banished.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'even so', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206043956044 0.240241500013 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.181318681319 0.157235817809 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0824175824176 0.0880659088768 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0659340659341 0.0497285424764 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0467032967033 0.0444667217837 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10989010989 0.12292977631 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0604395604396 0.0406280797675 149% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63965784423 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0274725274725 0.030933414821 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.14010989011 0.0997080785238 141% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0247252747253 0.0249443105267 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010989010989 0.0148568991511 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1867.0 2732.02544248 68% => OK
No of words: 341.0 452.878318584 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47507331378 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.263929618768 0.366273622748 72% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205278592375 0.280924506359 73% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.137829912023 0.200843997647 69% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0938416422287 0.132149295362 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63965784423 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 219.290929204 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489736070381 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 50.5015089256 55.4138127331 91% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.9444444444 23.380412469 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.004175488 59.4972553346 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.722222222 141.124799967 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9444444444 23.380412469 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 39.472303682 51.4728631049 77% => OK
Elegance: 1.28037383178 1.64882698954 78% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397369133019 0.391690518653 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108952943331 0.123202303941 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0692794576661 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.503122146039 0.547984918172 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163951926064 0.149214159877 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159738106416 0.161403998019 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812738078277 0.0892212321368 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.522958116915 0.385218514788 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0625836657051 0.0692045440612 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300319982432 0.275328986314 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0239125590036 0.0653680567796 37% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.