As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
How does rapidly sophisticating technology affects our mind and it’s thinking: positively or negatively? Although some people would argue that there are more deleterious effects of burgeoning technology on human mind, but the precise thing is highly advancing innovations have made human more smart and efficient. Therefore, in my perspective, there is no any doubt that the contemporary technologies have made people more efficient, and alart, rather than making then dull and lazier.
Those who would argue that flourishing technology is harming human’s ability to think about themselves would argue that due to the influence of facebook, and other social medias like twitter, people are deteriorating themselves as they stay online all round the clock hours and shoot through the air almost all the time. However, this argument is full of fallacies because they forget to mention that people are sharing different fresh ideas through the same facebook, talking to their relatives at the minimal cost, making many like-minded friends, and much else. Indeed they are doing what their forbearers used to do quite inefficiently, taking a long time in comparatively shorter period of time. Say, our generation send letters in a nanosecond through gmail, for which our fathers were compelled to wait for months – in the period of month we can send billions of letters if we need to.
Now consider the other aspect of the argument: technology makes human more smart and efficient, which I adhere to. Today, China has built bullet trains which can move at a maximum speed to 177 m/second largely minimizing the travel time and cost that used to take few years ago. These trains – utilize advanced electric multiple units – like CHR1A, B,E, CHR2A, B,E, CHR5A – take, on average, more then 3.1 million passengers daily to their workplace at a time duration even lesser than an aircraft can do. Clearly, people can save more time, and thus, allocate more time to themselves, their work and career, and their family.
Similarly, in our personal as well professional life we heavily use smart phones with different features like 3200 lumens, 8000/6000 lumb hours, 1024*768 dpi having wireless LAN support. These phones receive an internet service of say, 150 Mbps, transmitted by a router, or some other network device, with antenna of 11dbi. With these phones and internet services we can expand our business and can do many successes bring practices which were almost unimaginable few decades ago. In the present market where the entire value chain is based on internet and communication is sustaining more efficiently and suvvily because these communication technologies are there to assist.
To sum up, it is clear from the gravity of the above mentioned examples and arguments that flourishing technological innovations makes our life easier, comfortable, and efficient. Finally, they provide us more time to think about ourselves, our family and relatives.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234862385321 0.240241500013 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.150458715596 0.157235817809 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.097247706422 0.0880659088768 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0642201834862 0.0497285424764 129% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0532110091743 0.0444667217837 120% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0954128440367 0.12292977631 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0440366972477 0.0406280797675 108% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73156251896 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0275229357798 0.030933414821 89% => OK
Particles: 0.00183486238532 0.0016655270985 110% => OK
Determiners: 0.0623853211009 0.0997080785238 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0165137614679 0.0249443105267 66% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0165137614679 0.0148568991511 111% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2984.0 2732.02544248 109% => OK
No of words: 475.0 452.878318584 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.28210526316 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.370526315789 0.366273622748 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.282105263158 0.280924506359 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.195789473684 0.200843997647 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136842105263 0.132149295362 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73156251896 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 219.290929204 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591578947368 0.48968727796 121% => OK
Word variations: 75.4003152864 55.4138127331 136% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 27.9411764706 23.380412469 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4670342019 59.4972553346 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.529411765 141.124799967 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9411764706 23.380412469 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.674092028746 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 56.1517027864 51.4728631049 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.39726027397 1.64882698954 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376294562325 0.391690518653 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112779489028 0.123202303941 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0544640690394 0.077325440228 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.542666916375 0.547984918172 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.113941680323 0.149214159877 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138340392208 0.161403998019 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759466624627 0.0892212321368 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.234280615725 0.385218514788 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0581822334792 0.0692045440612 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228912941329 0.275328986314 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059568217919 0.0653680567796 91% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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