People should question the rules of authority as opposed to accepting them passively.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and
explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should
consider the reasons for which the statement may or may not be true and explain how these considerations
shape your position.
Rules are required for the smooth functioning of the society and it is on the elected representatives to see that rulea are made appropriately .But there are many instances where the society criticised the rules which paved the way to better and efficient rules.People shouldnt blindly accept the rules imposed by the authority.
Authorities make the rule based on their understanding of any issues at hand or percieved ones.But all places may not have the same issues or tackling the issues at different places of a country or even a state often times require varied strategies.In india central government made a rule that trasportation at night through the protected sancturies are prohibited.This was fine with many of the northern states as they had viable alternative routes which could be used at night.Southern states on the other hand faced a numerous troubles due to this as there were practically no alternative routes for transportation.Long queues of vehicles waiting for the night to pass became a common scenario at the forest check posts. The resulting traffic standstill made it difficult for emergency services to operate at night in those regions.Protest ensued and the law was modified for the southern states.Also it can be that a rule imposed at a point of time lost its significance or even worse has become counterproductive.One such rule is the mandatory exhaust gas testing for all vehichles which includes the newly purchased ones.This made sense a couple of years ago where the manufacture testing didnt include the smoke tests.Present situation where it requires rigorous manufacture including the smoke tests, necessitating them in the first year proves an unwarrented expense and trouble for the public.
In some cases, the rules can have unforseen consequences, which escaped the delibration of the law makers.It could well require that additional rules are required to make the one in question viable.The child labour prevention act was first instituted in India without envisaging any support to those families which solely depended on the earnings made by children.A number of cases were reported where such families which had parents unable to earn found themselves in total dismay.A parallel law which made the essentially required support system possible was the result of the public voice.
It may be argued that the rules are well thought out by their designers often taking years, and if people start questioning each rule it would lead to chaos.But any rule can escape one or to considerations especially when it is implemented over a wast area.The ability to question rules imposed on the society is a fundamental value underlying the notion of democracy.
People should have the freedom to question the rules which raises valid considerations.Granted this exista the execution of the rules will be lot smoother as the rules will appear self adopted rather than imposed.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'in some cases', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253668763103 0.240241500013 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.197064989518 0.157235817809 125% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100628930818 0.0880659088768 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0377358490566 0.0497285424764 76% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0293501048218 0.0444667217837 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115303983229 0.12292977631 94% => OK
Participles: 0.0754716981132 0.0406280797675 186% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.13319040254 2.79330140395 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0251572327044 0.030933414821 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0020964360587 0.0016655270985 126% => OK
Determiners: 0.136268343816 0.0997080785238 137% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0230607966457 0.0249443105267 92% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0272536687631 0.0148568991511 183% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2935.0 2732.02544248 107% => OK
No of words: 467.0 452.878318584 103% => OK
Chars per words: 6.28479657388 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.370449678801 0.366273622748 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.27408993576 0.280924506359 98% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.20556745182 0.200843997647 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.139186295503 0.132149295362 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13319040254 2.79330140395 112% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 219.290929204 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552462526767 0.48968727796 113% => OK
Word variations: 66.6917815994 55.4138127331 120% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6194690265 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 77.8333333333 23.380412469 333% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 190.159070839 59.4972553346 320% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 489.166666667 141.124799967 347% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.8333333333 23.380412469 333% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 0.674092028746 247% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.21349557522 480% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 105.242326909 51.4728631049 204% => OK
Elegance: 1.68253968254 1.64882698954 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463969540523 0.391690518653 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.267379887571 0.123202303941 217% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.043214568738 0.077325440228 56% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.944530808565 0.547984918172 172% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0784637142028 0.149214159877 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.318568770825 0.161403998019 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513254224593 0.0892212321368 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.378444215722 0.385218514788 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0706406421624 0.0692045440612 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.334053950631 0.275328986314 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514241261123 0.0653680567796 79% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 7.22455752212 55% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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