Some people avoid risky actions and prefer to stay in their comfort zone instead of taking chance and try to thrive their life. They may fear to loss whatever they have instead of gain more. Risky actions, however, have consequences that should be considered before taking action, but staying in one place to avoid potentioal consequences is not reasonable. Thus, I agree with argument that risky actins shoud have done after considering aftermath carefully, and I will explain my reasons now.
Fisrt of all, takning risk has always had huge advanteges for human kind. For instance, discovery of America could mention as a huge discovery that achieved by taking risk by Cristoph Cloumb. America has done alot for the world after discovery and it is the result of taking chance. Staying in comfort zone and afraid of finding new places could lead to lethargic behavior for people.
However, considering the consequences of the risky actions is crucial. Without thinking about upshots, people may face by some problems that is not correctable. For instance, a person who invest all of his money in the stock market in the hope of taking advantage may have face some disaster and lose all of his money. Because we can find a lot of situation that stock market plummt in the history. On the other hand, Warren Bafft who is one of the richest person in the world, have gained all of money from investing in the stock market. What he do professionally is considering the consequences of the risky action that wanted. Then if the potentioal advantages are more significant than consequences he would take the chance.
On the other hand, some people consider risky action as gamboling. Taking risk due to excitement feeling has always been intersting. As you may finding a lot of people in the history that gambol not for gaining money for just feeling the excitement situation. However, they face with incorrectable consequences in their life like bankrupty, divorce and like that. the main reason of this consequences is that they did not think about the consequences of their actions.
In conclusion, although taking risk and doing risky actions have had several achievement for humankind, considering the consequences of actions is an indivisible part of risky actions. Warrent Baffet could be an example of a person that consider about his risky action and lead him to success.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'faced'.
Suggestion: faced
...n the hope of taking advantage may have face some disaster and lose all of his money...
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Line 3, column 320, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ome disaster and lose all of his money. Because we can find a lot of situation that sto...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of situations'.
Suggestion: a lot of situations
...e all of his money. Because we can find a lot of situation that stock market plummt in the history...
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Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... investing in the stock market. What he do professionally is considering the conse...
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Line 4, column 364, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... like bankrupty, divorce and like that. the main reason of this consequences is tha...
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Line 4, column 383, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...vorce and like that. the main reason of this consequences is that they did not think...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun achievement seems to be countable; consider using: 'several achievements'.
Suggestion: several achievements
...g risk and doing risky actions have had several achievement for humankind, considering the conseque...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, thus, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99244332494 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69185505976 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486146095718 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.30428831 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.0909090909 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0454545455 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86363636364 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275332353611 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831808924009 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557808333566 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158935723705 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062088347689 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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