People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
We human-beings are thriving in this world primarily because of our intelligence. As with intelligence, our emotions are more convoluted than most other animals. With emotions, comes a great part of responsibility when to hold them back and when to act accordingly. There are times when emotional judgements are needed , and when logical-rational judgments are required. I mostly agree with the statement, but acknowledge there are a few instances when this statement is not true.
At first, making decisions are a important aspect of our lives. Humans have to make decisions about everything from as trivial or prosaic as which brand of coffee/tea should we drink to which job/career should we pursue. Every decision, even if they are small as consequences in our lives. If we are impulsive about these decisions, sooner or later this may become a cause of regret. For example, one may find the study of physics exciting and insightful. But, when it is time to make a decision about which subject to major in university, he may have chosen a different subject such as computer science, biology, or marketing. This decision may have been an impetuous decision rather than a rational logic working behind it. After several years, he may regret this decision which should have been more thoroughly considered. And this example may even work in reverse. As his love for physics overwhelms his rational judgement of life afterwords. He may have graduated from a university majoring in physics but, afterwards he had hard time finding a reasonable job. This may lead to anxiety and depression. This is why these life altering decisions should be taken with proper judgments and by intense emotions.
Consequently, we should look into our past to have a better grasp about the statement. If we look over to the period when Greece was the place of intellectuals, the paragons of human kind of that time flourished in that region. The philosophers like Aristotle, Socrates, Archimedes, Pythagoras, and etc were composed and even minded people. They were the ones that set knowledge as the first block of advancement of our race. To this days, it is knowledge that divides us sharply from the other animals. These people took decisions in a very composed way. They were the leaders of their time. As time went by, we are now divided into different independent countries which are led by leaders. These leaders maybe called prime ministers or presidents are elected by the votes of the people ( assuming we are talking about the democratic countries) . These leaders have to have the best judgments because the repercurssions falls the the whole country. Even a one bad judgment may lead to a catastrophic results. This may outbreak a war or even worse a "world-war". As some of the countries are now equipped with nuclear weapons, it is not a overstatement to say that another war may end the human race or any life on this planet.
However, there are some instances when emotional judgments are needed. For example, when people are oppressed because of being a minority in a country , a huge corruptions are conducted by the governemnt , and many more. In these times, people needs to emotional, and they need protest immediatly , even if there are dire consequences. Because these adversities are impeding the natural rights of the people. Only way to go against them is to protest on the streets.
In conclusion, logical reasoning is needed
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...otest on the streets. In conclusion, logical reasoning is needed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 33.0505617978 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2877.0 2235.4752809 129% => OK
No of words: 572.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02972027972 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95283599928 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503496503497 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 920.7 704.065955056 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 6.24550561798 304% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.10617977528 386% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.2370786517 183% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4610456138 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7567567568 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4594594595 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40540540541 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16442884456 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410812124172 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619760887447 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825406448144 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520675367988 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...mes when emotional judgements are needed , and when logical-rational judgments are...
^^
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rue. At first, making decisions are a important aspect of our lives. Humans h...
^
Line 3, column 1121, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this life' or 'these lives'?
Suggestion: this life; these lives
... to anxiety and depression. This is why these life altering decisions should be taken with...
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Line 5, column 430, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
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...st block of advancement of our race. To this days, it is knowledge that divides us s...
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Line 5, column 749, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...ybe called prime ministers or presidents are elected by the votes of the people ...
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Line 5, column 789, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... are elected by the votes of the people assuming we are talking about the democr...
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Line 5, column 845, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...e talking about the democratic countries . These leaders have to have the best jud...
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Line 5, column 927, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...gments because the repercurssions falls the the whole country. Even a one bad judgment ...
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Line 5, column 927, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
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Suggestion: the; the
...gments because the repercurssions falls the the whole country. Even a one bad judgment ...
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Line 5, column 1001, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'result'?
Suggestion: result
...bad judgment may lead to a catastrophic results. This may outbreak a war or even worse ...
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Line 5, column 1047, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...s. This may outbreak a war or even worse a 'world-war'. As some of the ...
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... This may outbreak a war or even worse a 'world-war'. As some of the c...
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...even worse a 'world-war'. As some of the countries are now equipped with nuclear...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...quipped with nuclear weapons, it is not a overstatement to say that another war m...
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Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...because of being a minority in a country , a huge corruptions are conducted by the...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'corruption'?
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... being a minority in a country , a huge corruptions are conducted by the governemnt , and m...
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Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...ruptions are conducted by the governemnt , and many more. In these times, people n...
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tional, and they need protest immediatly , even if there are dire consequences. Be...
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Line 7, column 337, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... , even if there are dire consequences. Because these adversities are impeding the natu...
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Line 9, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...otest on the streets. In conclusion, logical reasoning is needed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, may, so, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 33.0505617978 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2877.0 2235.4752809 129% => OK
No of words: 572.0 442.535393258 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02972027972 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95283599928 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503496503497 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 920.7 704.065955056 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 6.24550561798 304% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.10617977528 386% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.2370786517 183% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4610456138 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7567567568 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4594594595 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.40540540541 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16442884456 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410812124172 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619760887447 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825406448144 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520675367988 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.