People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

People make decisions at each and every step of their lives. There are many situations in our lives where we have to take critical decisions based on which we shape ourselves. Our decision making capabilities are tested at such crucial moments. People take decisions pragmatically or emotionally at different times.

Our decisions are based not only on our emotions at the moment but also on the circumstances and our perception about the situation. It is easier for a few people to be pragmatic while some individuals are inherently emotional.

Consider a case where a young girl who is madly in love with a guy. She is happy to help him out with money at all times. The guy if has no respect for the love and care and betrays her, will she able to justify her decisions with logic?. Even if she does, will they make sense? If decisions are based purely on emotions without prioritizing or justifying, it might be difficult to justify them later and might result in a bad decision.

Consider an individual who has an important meeting at office and his mother is ill while no one else is available to take care of her. If the individual decides to stay home and take care of his mother because of his emotions towards her mother, his mother will feel good about it. He might be worried about the meeting but there will be satisfaction of helping out his mother. It is easier for him to justify his decisions later or sooner if he is clear about his priorities.

Thus if an emotion based decision is taken with thoughtfulness and logic at the right moment justifying is clear and an easy task. The decisions then will turn out right. Decisions taken without proper thought and purely based on emotions and justified with logic later will be a bad decision and will result in poor decision making capabilities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.206997084548 0.240241500013 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.163265306122 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0816326530612 0.0880659088768 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0495626822157 0.0497285424764 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0962099125364 0.0444667217837 216% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.131195335277 0.12292977631 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0379008746356 0.0406280797675 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62998782079 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0233236151603 0.030933414821 75% => OK
Particles: 0.00874635568513 0.0016655270985 525% => OK
Determiners: 0.0728862973761 0.0997080785238 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0291545189504 0.0249443105267 117% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0145772594752 0.0148568991511 98% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1819.0 2732.02544248 67% => OK
No of words: 320.0 452.878318584 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.684375 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.290625 0.366273622748 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.2125 0.280924506359 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.15 0.200843997647 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1125 0.132149295362 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62998782079 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 219.290929204 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484375 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 48.7283829834 55.4138127331 88% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.7777777778 23.380412469 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1236130101 59.4972553346 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.055555556 141.124799967 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 23.380412469 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 0.674092028746 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 39.0277777778 51.4728631049 76% => OK
Elegance: 1.21698113208 1.64882698954 74% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318455432523 0.391690518653 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118909923149 0.123202303941 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0896255677351 0.077325440228 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.519161343953 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139974042117 0.149214159877 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111834993821 0.161403998019 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078514197799 0.0892212321368 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.214278671211 0.385218514788 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0286308197237 0.0692045440612 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206620413255 0.275328986314 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0907329149161 0.0653680567796 139% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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