People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Decision making is regarded as a art.Good logical skills, reasoning skills, emotional stability and to be able to calculate the impact of decision are some of the skills that constitutes decision making.The author contends that the people who make decisions based on emotional reasons and later justify those decisions with logic are poor decision makers.
From the author statements one could comprehend that the he does not considers people who takes the decisions on the basis of their emotions as bad decision makers but only those who justify them with logic afterwards. The author also fails to mention anything about the outcome of the decision that is being justified. Does author considers the decision maker poor even if the outcome of the decision was successful. This statement does not give complete reasoning for deciding if the person can be called as poor decision maker.
Good decision making skills are one of the most important skills that the industry demands. Employers want employees who have the capabilities to take the decision which is best for the company based on their logic and analytic skills rather than their emotions. The decisions are taken on the basic of the statistics and evidences to check the all the possible impacts of the decision on the company. The decision taken only on the basis of emotion have much higher chances of having a bad impact.Taking a decision on the basis of emotion may have serious effects on one's life. The emotion of the person at the time of the decision also will impact the decision. If the person was emotionally sound, then the decision may not always backfire , but if the decision is taken when the person is very happy or very angry or sad because of some course of events, then those factors may influence the person decision. Thus, decision taken during that time may result in vain.
In sum, taking decisions based only on your emotions can impact your decisions in a bad way. People should take the decisions on the basis of their logical and analytical reasoning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270491803279 0.240241500013 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.155737704918 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.068306010929 0.0880659088768 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0573770491803 0.0497285424764 115% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0218579234973 0.0444667217837 49% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133879781421 0.12292977631 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0464480874317 0.0406280797675 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.47896021419 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0136612021858 0.030933414821 44% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.142076502732 0.0997080785238 142% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0245901639344 0.0249443105267 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0218579234973 0.0148568991511 147% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2051.0 2732.02544248 75% => OK
No of words: 346.0 452.878318584 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92774566474 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.361271676301 0.366273622748 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263005780347 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.199421965318 0.200843997647 99% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106936416185 0.132149295362 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47896021419 2.79330140395 89% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 219.290929204 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.447976878613 0.48968727796 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.4262425788 55.4138127331 82% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.7142857143 23.380412469 106% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.0699767579 59.4972553346 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.5 141.124799967 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7142857143 23.380412469 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 51.014863749 51.4728631049 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.91860465116 1.64882698954 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246097087045 0.391690518653 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.221655893057 0.123202303941 180% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.10047528975 0.077325440228 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.667685454792 0.547984918172 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175956464656 0.149214159877 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121428543465 0.161403998019 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976541279996 0.0892212321368 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.476346986647 0.385218514788 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.128295146444 0.0692045440612 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230740494431 0.275328986314 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953985709392 0.0653680567796 146% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 8.0 3.66592920354 218% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.